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Emerging Solitude

Even a deceptive moon caresses every tender new leaf. Taut tongues whisper to their emerging solitude-- --Distrust can be a clever curtain like doubt sewn into each stars movement. Like the final steps I will take before I fly--------->

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/23/2015 11:25:00 PM

"Distrust can be a clever curtain like doubt sewn into each stars movement." wow...intriguing....love those lines, Red. Those final steps will be a sacred feat. I really enjoyed reading this thought-provoking verse. Always, Laura

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/23/2015 5:34:00 AM

Your last line takes this in a different direction that I see as positive. I can really relate to your words at this particular time. Curtain says it all! Outstanding! #7

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/22/2015 11:08:00 AM

Distrust can be a clever curtain indeed ...It leads to doubts..doubts that can lead to getting weaker or stronger....So much to ponder here R