Emergency Room

E nter the waiting chamber
M oments seem like hours
E veryone stays away
R est on the gurney
G host of those that died here
E nter and brush the curtains
N ow here then gone
C ause that is all that one sees
Y earning to get answers

R emove to x-ray
O perative answers will come
O pen to options
M aybe

(I wrote this awhile back
nothing new has happened.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 10:20 AM
Good acrostic on this topic, SAra. Oh, don't worry about my driving. haha. Usually I just go straight to work on the freeway and back home. I get plenty of relaxation. haha. LUv ya, andrea
Situation Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 7:19 AM
original , creative, one of a kind. who would have thought. i can see you sitting in a waiting room with pen and paper and a ephipany. lol T.S.
La France Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 5:14 AM
You expressed the helplessness of the emergency room well in this fine acrostic poem~~
Anderson Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 11:19 AM
The only thing is Sara that those moments turn into hours waiting to be seen....lol Jimmy
K. Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 11:00 PM
Hi Sara-- you sure described the feelings of being in the ER so well here-- I think it is the waiting that is most frustrating....prayers continue for you and your family-- thanks for dropping by my poems :)
Dufresne Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Been there done that too, Sara. brings back some memories for sure. Never thought of writing about it but that's what poetry is about. Cool
Falotico Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 4:01 PM
Been there before, some happy endings and some sadly not... enjoyed your thoughts today my dear Poet friend..luv Michael
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