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Emerald Waves

emerald waves
echo’s of the feasting ocean 
ready for a new day



For Francine Roberts Contest
"NATURE"


April 12, 2013

natureoceanhaiku

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Pandita Sietesantos

October 30, 2014 at 2:44 PM

Beautiful haiku! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

May 13, 2013 at 10:46 PM

How pretty!! and welcome back to the reality, sweetie.

Michael Dom

May 13, 2013 at 2:11 AM

Excellent image in line two: 'echoes of the feasting ocean' - WOW! I love it.

Poet Destroyer A

April 26, 2013 at 11:01 AM

Hello Maria, i love the image, and the new day sounds... deep like the sea... enjoyed...Linda

Sara Kendrick

April 26, 2013 at 6:56 AM

Great way to go with this work..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyoed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Len Gasun

April 22, 2013 at 9:17 AM

HI my dear friend Maria! How are you? I saw you on line. I'm pretty sure you're now enjoying your vacation to the max! Mind me? Whoaa!! Still so busy in school. Final exam is tom. & culminating act. on Fri. The opening/first day of reporting is on May 7. We're still getting a chance to talk to the principal & ask permission. Enjoy you vacation my dear! So happy again to read this poem of yours! Just stopping by also to say hi & send you big big sweetest hugs! love lots, Leonora

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

April 21, 2013 at 5:14 PM

Love the image, Maria; how about a Questionku? :) Love, Hanitra

Len Gasun

April 13, 2013 at 11:15 AM

Great poem with a fantastic image my dear friend Maria! i love it so much! I'm sure this will win, too. Good luck and best wishes my dear. Thank you so much for the very wonderful comments on my poem. Happy Songkran as well. Hope you're enjoying the festive! love and big hugs, Leonora