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Emerald Thoughts

If my life is like a river, dreams float soft in emerald thoughts, multi-hued fragrant petals of amaranth swaying in brisk wind, budding flowers glistening on branches, elated, euphoric ~ If my life is a sapphire sky, dreams wander like rainbow sailboats, some day they imagined reaching shores, now gliding gloriously golden glimpse eternal azure dreaming makes my entity whole... love, longing, passionate desires… hopes intoxicate eager soul, drizzle of rain on my senses.. birdsongs rouse mosaic of dreams ~ March 30, 2022 A Brian Strand Premier Choice Poetry Contest Syllables (8 syllables per line) checked by HMS.com

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Date: 3/30/2022 6:41:00 PM
Your emerald thoughts flow like a meandering river...as majestic as the gush of wind on a hot summer day..So much loveliness in this write. A fav for me..All the best in the contest.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/30/2022 6:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dearest Friend. Your fave - feel so honoured!
Date: 3/30/2022 6:39:00 PM
Love the feeling in your imagery in this verse, Malabika. Blessings with lots of inspiration my friend
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/30/2022 6:44:00 PM
Dear Eve, truly appreciate your lovely comment. Blessings ~ Mala

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