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5th in Create a Crystalline (Sponsor: Nette Onclaud)

Judged: June 16th, 2025

Emerald Stone

Emerald stone stands in the eyes
When possessive lovers lose their prize
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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mysore Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 7:11 AM
oh so nice. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Layne Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 3:21 AM
Thank you. These short-form contests have helped broaden my knowledge about other poetry styles.
Evangeline Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 7:18 AM
Using emerald stones as metaphor for jealousy (green eyes) is wonderfully creative. Great work!
Layne Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 3:19 AM
Your feedback is appreciated. Thank you ~TL.
May Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 6:49 PM
Jealousy can make them lose the prize Nicely expressed
Layne Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 3:18 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
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