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Emerald Stone

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Nette Onclaud

June 14th, 2025

Emerald stone stands in the eyes When possessive lovers lose their prize

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 6/18/2025 7:11:00 AM

oh so nice. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Trina Layne
Date: 6/19/2025 3:21:00 AM

Thank you. These short-form contests have helped broaden my knowledge about other poetry styles.

Vanya Evangeline

Date: 6/16/2025 7:18:00 AM

Using emerald stones as metaphor for jealousy (green eyes) is wonderfully creative. Great work!

Trina Layne
Date: 6/19/2025 3:19:00 AM

Your feedback is appreciated. Thank you ~TL.

Joseph May

Date: 6/14/2025 6:49:00 PM

Jealousy can make them lose the prize Nicely expressed

Trina Layne
Date: 6/19/2025 3:18:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph!