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Emerald Pathways

Written~ September 12, 2023 My cozy home, encircled by emerald pathways. California autumnal beauty, created that way!! This blessed day, He painted with magical rays, Come on down, observe the deep, green leaves sway, Saturday and Sundays are such glorious days here, Grandma not hiding behind glass, there is nothing to fear. Flowers of all sorts, in dawn’s glory growing, Hoping some growth in my poetic heart is showing God, most assuredly holds me in His gentle hands, As I do my best to follow His rules and commands. Poetry, has been such a spiritual blessing to me, And those who wove me into their souls, effortlessly.

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Date: 9/16/2023 11:27:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this fine new creation my good friend. Your poetry sings to this old poet's heart. A fav.. God bless you..
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/16/2023 1:05:00 PM
I sent you a soupmail about FAVING. I accept yours with gratitude and friendship…I know yours come from your heart, I am blessed to have you in my life. Pangie xx
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Date: 9/16/2023 11:56:00 AM
Hello, Robert, I really like this one… the last line, does apply to you. It’s always been like that between us. Your quality poetry and support always….not sometimes …..mean so much. You are the lightning that makes my pen flash!! And I am far from an imagist or wordsmith. Not me! I never write to impress any person with intellectual reportage! I am no intellectual))As ee Cummings said, “kisses are a better fate than wisdom, lady, I swear by all the flowers!” And when I got the impact of that~ my life shifted. No need to Fav this…your comments make my day. Hugs to you and yours, Pangie xx
Date: 9/13/2023 12:23:00 PM
The autumnal sunshine illuminates everything in its golden light, it's gods way of showing us his creation in all its glory. I know you live in a beautiful part of the state. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 9/13/2023 1:10:00 PM
DearTom, excellent poet and friend to my family since my early days! I must openly acknowledge and applaud you! Autumn is indeed stunning and a spiritual time of year. Central,CA is a stunning place. I hope I got this point across in my poem. The bunnies and feral cats add to the beauty! Pangie xx
Date: 9/13/2023 6:59:00 AM
Your poem is a masterpiece, bursting with creativity and loveliness. Each couplet is like a vibrant painting, captivating the eyes and stirring the soul. Every line is a poetic gem, crafted with the utmost skill and talent, a true testament to the beauty that resides within your spirit.
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Date: 9/13/2023 10:16:00 AM
Tons of thank yous. I am no wise poet, nor a poet doing gymnastic in poetry to please or delight anyone. My poetry game is to be open and honest. Above all, humble…you see me in these couplets,))) and soulful poetry, You impress me because I get the sense, you really care. And are not in a hurry like a zephyr train to get on th the next poet….your comments in themselves Show appreciation! Thank you, Pangie xxx
Date: 9/13/2023 6:24:00 AM
A beautiful poem today. So creative and lovely. A joy to read.
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Date: 9/13/2023 10:51:00 AM
Sp pleased yo enjoyed this, Elena! By the way, your comments are a joy this poet is grateful for! Pangie xx
Date: 9/12/2023 11:07:00 PM
Dear Pangie- loved this one. What a gorgeous title too.Each couplet is visually beautiful. So many poetic lines, ‘ Flowers of all sorts, in dawn’s glory growing’ Gorgeous! The ending couplet is stunning to conclude this wonderful poem. Hugs and smiles to you :):)
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Date: 9/13/2023 10:48:00 AM
Hello, Christina.. hugs from California! I so enjoyed this write. It is so very me in a glorious mood. I pen whatever rings true for me, and no sunject is off limits, unless it insults the human body, gad created us, no need to pen nasty poetry. The sun is nearly blinding today, but shining as your comment! Pangie xx
Date: 9/12/2023 10:51:00 PM
Poetry is truly a blessing, so cathartic and also a way to dream away from reality. I really love your rhymes here and the way your words flow so seamlessly, in such a captivating cadence. So melodious. California must have warm weather always? I heard from a friend. Weekends are my favourite time. I really love the line “ flowers of all sorts..” hoping..” so good! A beautiful poem that i enjoyed reading. You are truly a blessed soul. And your ink never fails to amaze me .
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Date: 9/13/2023 10:38:00 AM
Ink, hello, to begin..we do not have warm weather where I live year round, but, it never gets cold as in the Midwest, like Chicago, I mean. There is no snow, Southern, CA, is warmer year round. No major fault lines here. So no big earthquakes. It will get colder here in November,but not for long. No bare trees here. Those are so sad looking…..orange tree in the backyard!….and gigantic pines. Smells so good! Appreciate your feelings, on the cadence of the words. Excellent you were specific on the lines you liked, so very helpful to this author. I try a little each day to be better! But I only write to be truthful, using whatever form I see fit, Ink. Thank you for a fully, expressive comment! Pangiexx

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