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Emerald Eyes

Her emerald eyes Like seas of tropical isles Seduced me as they mesmerized Emerald butterflies rise As their hypnotic dance intensifies

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/23/2013 8:54:00 AM

love the simplicity of this poem yet has passion too well written and congratulations on winning

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/18/2013 9:03:00 PM

Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2013 11:19:00 AM

A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2013 10:02:00 AM

wow some eyes are those...

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/12/2013 5:28:00 AM

With the power of a few well chosen words you painted a beautiful picture

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2013 11:47:00 PM

GREAT imagery!!!

Donna Jones

Date: 5/11/2013 9:12:00 PM

Very beautiful Joseph...