Emerald Eyes

Her emerald eyes
Like seas of tropical isles
Seduced me as they mesmerized
Emerald butterflies rise
As their  hypnotic dance intensifies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hamilton Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 8:54 AM
love the simplicity of this poem yet has passion too well written and congratulations on winning
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA
A  Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 11:19 AM
A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT
Horsman Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 10:02 AM
wow some eyes are those...
Sirak Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 5:28 AM
With the power of a few well chosen words you painted a beautiful picture
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 11:47 PM
GREAT imagery!!!
Jones Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 9:12 PM
Very beautiful Joseph...
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