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Embracing Autumn

It’s
                                            now
                                        time when
                                        fiery leaves
                                        fall on the ground,
                                           I remember you my love,
                            Wish you’re here hanging with me around
                          On this blissful moment, a fiery love begins
                under these deciduous trees  hold me  close once again, 
           sun shines  in my eyes forever , a love unrivalled to any other
     each single leaf touches my skin, eases my tearful longing and pain                               autumn season stands, all sweet memories of you deep in my heart remain..... 
   each leaf cascades  like bright shooting star on endless days and nights 
             you’re touching  my heart as each  swirls gracefully in sight                              
              here they are, I catch them one by one as they gently fall  
                             like the time you catch me too, I felt so great , 
                                      thrilling ...so amazing and  wonderful
                                I bask in this autumn delight alone 
                                colors shed  my tears, wipe them all
                                     in assurance that 
                                         one  day
                                         you’ll be                           
                                         home
  


©2014Leonora Galinta
     All Rights Reserved

10/10/2014

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Scott Thirtyseven November 12, 2015 at 10:00 AM You have written a poem of beautiful shape and sincerity. Well done. Chok Dee Krap. Len Gasun November 14, 2015 at 9:12 AM Kap khon ka mak mak naka. Chook Dee duai naka. Sawatdika.

Kp Nunez October 6, 2015 at 4:48 AM Beautiful, both the shape and the content! You can try entering this in that Old Poem contest, Leo. PS. Belated happy birthday! Good health, more blessings, more time with your loved ones and the best that life can offer - my prayer for you! Sorry, I wasn't around yesterday. Go to Anne-Lise's page, she has a surprise for you there. Big hugs! Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 10:09 AM Oh, thank you so much my very dear friend, Kim. But I cannot find the contest. Anway, it's ok my very dear friend and kabayan. Thank you so much for your loving greetings and wishes. I've been to our dear Anne Lise's page already. Thank you, thank you sooo much. Many hugs!

Jan Allison October 5, 2015 at 6:59 PM Wow what a wonderful leaf shaped poem I LOVE it:-) :-) hugs jan xx Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 10:11 AM Thank you so much my very dear friend, Jan for your precious time stopping by and for loving my humble write. Many hugs, back at you!

Tim Smith October 5, 2015 at 4:27 PM Very lovely poem Leonora and a Happy Birthday!! Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 11:08 AM Thank you so much my very dear friend, Tim! Many hugs to you!

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2015 at 3:55 PM It's an old one? Well, it is really awesome! Happy birthday AGAIN. Is your day over? Here it is only half finished!~! Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 11:16 AM Yes, my very dear friend Andrea. I wrote it before but didn't post it coz i was so lazy to fix the form. Thank you so much for reading and your birthday greetings! Many hugs to you!

Paul Callus October 5, 2015 at 2:51 PM Each falling leaf revives a memory...autumn's romantic touch! A really delightful shape poem, Leonora! ~~ If I'm not mistaken it's also your birthday....many happy returns:) May you bask in autumn's delight. Hugs // paul Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 11:29 AM Thank you so much for lovingly visiting my poem and your very encouraging feedback my very dear friend, Paul. Yes, it was my very dear friend. It was last Monday here. Thank you thank you so much for your greetings and wishes! Many hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2015 at 12:17 PM - A lovely poem written in an autumn leaf, unique and wonderful, dear Leonora - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 11:25 AM Thank you so much my dearest Anne Lise for reading my old poem. Many hugs to you!

Laura Leiser October 5, 2015 at 11:09 AM What a magnificent shape poem about the lovely romance of autumn, Leonora! I really enjoyed your most excellent write, a 7! Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 11:26 AM Thank you thank you so much for your precious time reading and enjoying my experimental poem my dear friend, Laura and your very inspiring comments and rating! Many hugs to you!