Embracing a Magical Moment

With stiff balmy sea breeze tousling our hair, 
We used to walk barefoot along the shore, 
Feeling the water over our feet and the sand
And admire and wonder at the crabs


Date: 04/20/2021
Submitted for: Liberum Divisa 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

Original Poem: A Drizzle of Memories dated 04/04/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Funny you should mention crabs, our sons partner has just won a photographic contest and it was baby crabs coming and going, on the wet sand just where the waves are lapping on the sand - she has just started as she also paints amazingly. I love the thought of what the two of you are doing letting the water and sand run over your feet - I find it romantic. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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April 21, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Anitha, There is such a refreshing breath of air in the foamy fold of your poem's waves. -Richard
Kannan Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 3:05 AM
That's so lovely to read... Good luck in the contest...
Bangalee Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 9:01 PM
balmy sea breeze attracts all human minds magically........nice to read you
Poet Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Waves, perfect for writing as these are fascinating, engaging subjects with fantastic imagery; good luck in the contest and warm hugs// Las
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