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Embracing a Magical Moment

With stiff balmy sea breeze tousling our hair, We used to walk barefoot along the shore, Feeling the water over our feet and the sand And admire and wonder at the crabs Date: 04/20/2021 Submitted for: Liberum Divisa 5 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory R Barden Original Poem: A Drizzle of Memories dated 04/04/2021

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Date: 4/23/2021 12:23:00 PM
Funny you should mention crabs, our sons partner has just won a photographic contest and it was baby crabs coming and going, on the wet sand just where the waves are lapping on the sand - she has just started as she also paints amazingly. I love the thought of what the two of you are doing letting the water and sand run over your feet - I find it romantic. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/21/2021 8:57:00 AM
Anitha, There is such a refreshing breath of air in the foamy fold of your poem's waves. -Richard
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Date: 4/21/2021 3:05:00 AM
That's so lovely to read... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 4/20/2021 9:01:00 PM
balmy sea breeze attracts all human minds magically........nice to read you
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Date: 4/20/2021 9:26:00 AM
Waves, perfect for writing as these are fascinating, engaging subjects with fantastic imagery; good luck in the contest and warm hugs// Las
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