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EMBOLDENING ART The stone you pelt at a fruit tree causes it immense pain It still feeds you with smile a delicious sweet fruit Between sharp blades you crush the sugarcane Thirst it quenches with its juice dripping for you so sweet Concealing to the core, stark suffering from the bad world’s abuse... The art of exuding scent of kindness and love is mastered by few This art etched on their soul, they suffer for others, redeem and die with it!
15th November 2016 ~For Laura Loo's contest~ ~Quote Prompt I- Free Verse~ Quote Prompt: "How is it so easy for you to be kind to people?" he asked... Milk and honey dripped from my lips and I answered, "cause people have not been kind to me." -Rupi kaur

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Date: 11/19/2016 4:06:00 AM
Splendid! I really loved it!! Congrats Anulaxmi, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 11/19/2016 12:07:00 AM
Oh, this is lovely, Anu:) very good examples explained:) congratulations:)
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Date: 11/18/2016 5:20:00 PM
Very deep feelings for things other than humans but can be compared to humans and their feelings. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 11/18/2016 1:27:00 PM
This is a lovely take on this poem, to consider the feelings of the plants that nourish us. Well done Anu.
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Date: 11/18/2016 9:53:00 AM
So touching and warm Anu, thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 11/18/2016 11:51:00 AM
Dear Luloo, thank you so very much dear, i am so glad you liked it, you are welcome :)//love, Anu:)