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Embodying the Light

Light withdrawn Expands again approaches dawn clucks the hen Constellations fade Skies o’erspread glory arrayed chickens fed Rising sun Prayers bespake omelets done tastebuds awake Entry in 'Embodying the Light' contest Sponsor: Unspeaking Speaker January 27, 2025

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Karen Jones

Date: 2/2/2025 10:49:00 PM

I agree with Michael it encompasses all the goings on before during light! Love the energy and the familiar clever undertones unique to your poetry!

Michael Tor

Date: 1/30/2025 5:59:00 PM

Wow Gershon this one is a winner in my book. Great examples shared and this one is a favorite...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/30/2025 8:39:00 PM

Appreciate the FAVE here, John. Thanks for the encouragement! ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/30/2025 3:41:00 PM

Hello Gershon, Are you cooking? make my omelet with mushrooms. with toast on the side and a cup of coffee.. i am on my way over. enjoy your eve ning my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/31/2025 9:45:00 AM

Hello Gershon, oh,, Gershon it sounds good to me. Can not wait. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/30/2025 8:40:00 PM

ok, Darlene. I'll give your order to my head chef, and he'll have it ready for you zippity-doo-dah. OK?

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/29/2025 11:26:00 AM

What a creative Light write. You have eggs & are cooking??? I will be over. Hot coffee & toast would also be great. Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" in the contest... Have a fun day writing away.............

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/30/2025 8:44:00 PM

How about burnt toast and cold coffee? -- My twin specialties... ~ Gourmet Gershon