Embers of Time

They sat beside each other
in a classroom long ago;
he says he had a crush on her,
she says she did not know.
Now their footsteps softly echo
in the hallways where they walked;
school house walls, were they not silent,
would divulge the words they talked.

Old bully Time, pushing , shoving,
maneuvering our lives along;
once looking back, we wonder . . .
was this the right choice or the wrong?
Yesterday. he did not speak a word,
silence-- struck dumb by boyish fears;
he went his way, she went her own-
counting twinned  rosaries of tears.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, 4-20-2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:48 PM
Congrats on your win!!!
Onclaud Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 11:38 PM
fine write, faye.. applause to you and huggs
A   Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Faye, , Congratulations, a beautiful " Embers Of Time" theme..... Always~ Linda
Ryerson Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 5:12 PM
Hmmm, I wonder who the shy gentleman (?) is that you refer to here. Lemme think a sec...Naw, CAN'T be! Faye, I am SO happy and proud that you entered this gem in Gail's contest! Your gonna break the top 100 before you know it...
Gibson Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 5:32 PM
We will see....thanks for the inspiration.
Mehta Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:25 AM
Congratulations on a fine fine, Faye
A. Sharma Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 10:32 PM
Such a beautiful write Faye n equally wonderful is the win ! huge congrats !
Parker Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 6:32 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win Faye
Walker  Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
Eastman Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 1:36 PM
How sad... But I love your work.
Carrillo Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 8:40 PM
This is sad, but good. Sometimes things are not meant to be. Thanks for sharing... Lucy
Gibson Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 8:37 PM
Thank you, Lucilla.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 7:14 AM
I so relate to this. As a boy I had so many crushes and lovely imaginations of what could have been. I woder if the reality would have been as sweet?
Toil Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Oh Faye, this brings back so many memories... of high school shyness towards girls and how many relationships might have been but for the hesitation to say a simple hello. A beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. Peace...Sam
Ryerson Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Oh mercy me Faye...I am SO thrilled and honored that you chose this subject for the contest...You wouldn't BELIEVE how many times and how long I regretted my shyness...Your two lines: "Once looking back, we wonder... Was this the right choice or the wrong?" followed by the last four say it all... I am SO happy and proud to see you entering contests! I see a win in this one and many more to come...
Gibson Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 8:18 PM
My dear friend...how sweet you are. I just woke up the other day and these words were in my head. I write in my sleep. Do you?
Merrill Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 2:25 AM
Very nice, Faye. An entertaining adventure. Thank you for the trip! Hugs, Mel :)
Gibson Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 7:58 PM
Thanks for stopping by...read your latest and found up to your usual high standards.
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