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Embers of Time

Twists and big turns in the name of real love Either it will mend or break a heart If this feeling of love, its author is God Involved persons then must render their part He logs more on oceans and she on land Friendship to sweet soulful romance, began No phone-lines nor e-mails nothing advance With only black pen and paper on hand Both of them, grab take that one lifetime chance Thirty five years now, they are on love dance Skin gone sag, wrinkled. Hair now thin and gray Holding hands while walking like good old days Romantic dinners. Roses. Gifts and cards. Hugs, kisses... "I love you", their darling say Ageless enduring in embers of time Blazing better within embers of time. written in iambic pentameter by: olive_eloisa 1:18 am April 04, 2014 __________________to my parents.. :) Praise GOD! CONTEST: EMBERS OF TIME SPONSOR: Gail Angel Doyle 1ST PLACE, praise God .. :)

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Date: 5/25/2014 6:35:00 PM
hmn...you rock, eloi!
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Date: 5/27/2014 8:27:00 AM
Thanks much te :D GBU
Date: 5/22/2014 11:13:00 PM
parental love at its best, eloi.. wow,, applause and huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 12:33:00 AM
Thanks much Nette.. :) really appreciate your comment.. :) it makes me miss more my family.. :D
Date: 5/20/2014 10:33:00 PM
Olive, , Congratulations, a beautiful " Embers Of Time" theme..... Always~ Linda
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 5:58:00 AM
thanks much LInda.. :) really appreciate you.. :)
Date: 5/20/2014 8:49:00 AM
Back again......Congratulations...Top Podium:))) // paul
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Date: 5/22/2014 5:58:00 AM
thanks much Paul.. :) GBU
Date: 5/20/2014 7:51:00 AM
A sweet love story Olive ...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/22/2014 5:55:00 AM
Thanks much Joseph.. :D
Date: 5/20/2014 1:21:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine fine, Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 6:04:00 AM
thank you so much sir for dropping by.. ;) Im very glad for each visit you made.. :)
Date: 5/19/2014 10:16:00 PM
Lovely write Olive,,, every word full of emotions,,, especially loved ending two lines ,,, congrats on huge win !
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 1:46:00 PM
Thanks yes :) this dedicated to my dear parents..:) and really I love them..:)
Date: 5/19/2014 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 1:41:00 PM
thanks much Verlena..:) I didn't expect it but praise God :)
Date: 4/24/2014 4:26:00 PM
This was an ancient and grand piece of majesticness and it was quite a thrill to read this... :) I'll favorite it and favorite you as my fav poetess. :) You are crowned for such precious lines. -DWB
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/24/2014 4:41:00 PM
thanks David.. :) It's nice of you to come by and visit.. :), I am inspire by my parents love story.. :) and as until now still still they are.. :), God bless us always.. olive eloisa here.. :)
Date: 4/23/2014 4:47:00 AM
Yes, I'm pinoy dear kababayan. HAHAHA and I can't seem to stop reading your enchanting pieces. They all seem to have fairytale qualities.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/23/2014 5:00:00 AM
hahahha.. :D!!!! welcome here.. :) thanks for reading. :) i will as well to yours.. actually i made "one and two" one of my favorites.. :) nice nice one.. :) . olive eloisa here. :)
Date: 4/11/2014 8:22:00 AM
Good for them. Love it, Olive :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/11/2014 5:06:00 PM
thanks you for dropping by..:)
Date: 4/10/2014 5:49:00 PM
How lovely Olive_eloi !! Do your parents read your poems? I'm sure they would be so happy to see this one. This proves that some people can pass the test of time, where love is concerned :) // paul
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Date: 4/11/2014 5:03:00 PM
before when i was in grade school Paul.. :) but these new ones not, they didn't only when I mistakenly post it in fb ,.. :D

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