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EMBERS OF TIME

Twists and big turns in the name of real love
Either it will mend or break a heart
If this feeling of love, its author is God
Involved persons then must render their part

He logs more on oceans and she on land
Friendship to sweet soulful romance, began

No phone-lines nor e-mails nothing advance
With only black pen and paper on hand
Both of them, grab take that one lifetime chance
Thirty five years now, they are on love dance

Skin gone sag, wrinkled. Hair now thin and gray
Holding hands while walking like good old days
Romantic dinners. Roses. Gifts and cards.
Hugs, kisses... "I love you", their darling say

Ageless enduring in embers of time 
Blazing better within embers of time.

written in iambic pentameter by:

olive_eloisa
1:18 am
April 04, 2014


__________________to my parents.. :) Praise GOD!
CONTEST: EMBERS OF TIME
SPONSOR: Gail Angel Doyle
1ST PLACE, praise God .. :)

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Date: 5/25/2014 6:35:00 PM
hmn...you rock, eloi!
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Date: 5/27/2014 8:27:00 AM
Thanks much te :D GBU
Date: 5/22/2014 11:13:00 PM
parental love at its best, eloi.. wow,, applause and huggs
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Date: 5/23/2014 12:33:00 AM
Thanks much Nette.. :) really appreciate your comment.. :) it makes me miss more my family.. :D
Date: 5/21/2014 4:49:00 PM
In youth we infatuated with our love's skin.. As we mature our infatuation shifts to the soul, grow deeper and deeper. You capture that with this winner Olive !
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Date: 5/22/2014 6:00:00 AM
thanks much Dave.. nice of you to drop by and leave some message.. :)
Date: 5/20/2014 10:33:00 PM
Olive, , Congratulations, a beautiful " Embers Of Time" theme..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 5/22/2014 5:58:00 AM
thanks much LInda.. :) really appreciate you.. :)
Date: 5/20/2014 8:49:00 AM
Back again......Congratulations...Top Podium:))) // paul
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Date: 5/22/2014 5:58:00 AM
thanks much Paul.. :) GBU
Date: 5/20/2014 7:51:00 AM
A sweet love story Olive ...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/22/2014 5:55:00 AM
Thanks much Joseph.. :D
Date: 5/20/2014 4:21:00 AM
This is so much more then just a fine win... this poem is a gift to the poet and the reader. Both last two lines and and the first two move me totally.. while everything in between is so beyond beautiful! Congrats on the write(!) and WIN Dutch Greetings Elly
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/20/2014 1:11:00 PM
thank you Elly.. :) i love this poem as it depicts my parent's love story.. :) and until now can't help to be contagiously happy when i see love still shining in their eyes.. :)
Date: 5/20/2014 1:21:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine fine, Olive
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:04:00 AM
thank you so much sir for dropping by.. ;) Im very glad for each visit you made.. :)
Date: 5/19/2014 10:16:00 PM
Lovely write Olive,,, every word full of emotions,,, especially loved ending two lines ,,, congrats on huge win !
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 1:46:00 PM
Thanks yes :) this dedicated to my dear parents..:) and really I love them..:)
Date: 5/19/2014 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 5/29/2014 1:41:00 PM
thanks much Verlena..:) I didn't expect it but praise God :)
Date: 4/24/2014 4:26:00 PM
This was an ancient and grand piece of majesticness and it was quite a thrill to read this... :) I'll favorite it and favorite you as my fav poetess. :) You are crowned for such precious lines. -DWB
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Date: 4/24/2014 4:41:00 PM
thanks David.. :) It's nice of you to come by and visit.. :), I am inspire by my parents love story.. :) and as until now still still they are.. :), God bless us always.. olive eloisa here.. :)
Date: 4/23/2014 4:47:00 AM
Yes, I'm pinoy dear kababayan. HAHAHA and I can't seem to stop reading your enchanting pieces. They all seem to have fairytale qualities.
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Date: 4/23/2014 5:00:00 AM
hahahha.. :D!!!! welcome here.. :) thanks for reading. :) i will as well to yours.. actually i made "one and two" one of my favorites.. :) nice nice one.. :) . olive eloisa here. :)
Date: 4/14/2014 12:16:00 AM
Olive, I bow for perfection (taking deep bow in honor of your brilliantly beautiful poem)
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Date: 4/14/2014 5:47:00 AM
:O! thanks sir Dave.. :) im glad for your visit no need for bow only smile and a handshake is fine. :D
Date: 4/11/2014 8:22:00 AM
Good for them. Love it, Olive :)
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Date: 4/11/2014 5:06:00 PM
thanks you for dropping by..:)
Date: 4/10/2014 5:49:00 PM
How lovely Olive_eloi !! Do your parents read your poems? I'm sure they would be so happy to see this one. This proves that some people can pass the test of time, where love is concerned :) // paul
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Date: 4/11/2014 5:03:00 PM
before when i was in grade school Paul.. :) but these new ones not, they didn't only when I mistakenly post it in fb ,.. :D