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Embers of Ire

Dust hapless had settled rough On vacuous land, tanned in taupe Lonely and distressed As it simmered for life Its flowers had died Only a few left in time To settle calm and blossom elsewhere Bearing remnants of an era gone by. Trees cried until they died Their seeds lay morose Unable to steal Elixir for their life Their branches lay fallen Gathering a fire Their ache in crimson Stalking deliriously in vain As their embers crackling Reveal their pain Unto heavens mocking above Unaware they had turned surdomute More than a long while ago.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/21/2016 7:25:00 PM
Sudha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:31:00 AM
truly deep touching excellent pen sudha bless youy
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Sudha Chandra
Date: 12/17/2014 5:59:00 AM
Many thanks Liam! Means a lot. regards
Date: 12/17/2014 2:18:00 AM
very deep and sad with brilliant imagery - very well penned - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Sudha Chandra
Date: 12/17/2014 5:58:00 AM
Thanks a ton Jan!!!
Date: 12/17/2014 12:03:00 AM
Very cool poem.. I love the way you use language.. very effective and affecting.. One of my new fav.s ~PS (The title is really cool too, and is a piece of the poem, like it should) I think poets too often under-appreciate the importance of Titles.
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Sudha Chandra
Date: 12/17/2014 5:58:00 AM
Thanks Joel for your kind words, regards

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