Embers Ii

The embers of day glow on the horizon edge. 
I see the carriage coming afar. 
Another day has past away we morn its demise, 
Twilight has spread its deep indigo hued wings across the face of this fleeting earth, 
shadows grow in deep places 
welling up darkness like Tidal pools. 
The heavens reveal a vast wealth 
of diamond dust left after a god forges the universe, 
Like flares in black silk 
star’s trace images that man recorded stories by. 
A sliver orb of cold light, 
the empress of night, 
the eye of a Waxing god paints all in sliver white highlights, rides the heavens to midnight. 
The dust of a billion galaxies splash across 
the vault of sky, a milky way leading souls 
to the afterlife. 
I see the thing it grins sinisterly. 
The night is sold solid silent, 
deep the sparks of home 
of humanity, are the only breaks 
in the sea of night, vast. 
The strongholds of family. 
As embers of day die on the horizon ledge,
Another day is done, we long for the sun. 
Twilight has spread its deep hues across 
the face of this rare earth, shadows live 
in deep places, darknest seas. 
The heavens reveal a vast wealth 
of stars twinkling like dust left after 
divinity forges the universe, 
billions of worlds splash across 
the vault of night, a milky way 
leading souls to immortality, 
as death has stopped benevolently for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/9/2021 12:19:00 PM
Your imagination soars among the stars in your writing, Jehiel. A worthy ending.
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Date: 10/9/2021 2:42:00 PM
Thanks, Jenna! Your comments are welcome and much appreciated. Thanks my writing is unconventional and not like others I have read. So its nice to hear someone say something positive even if my poems get dark and obtuse. Thanks again.
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