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Embers Gleam in your Eyes

campfire flames flare bright
licking high into the night
fingers seek mirrors
to show the utmost delight
the fire wants to share tonight

your eyes catch that glow—
reflecting in afterglow
like rose under chin
shows a warm red glow on skin
a token of love aflame

out beyond what's near
I see blazing stars mirrored
back through time and space
quivering constellations
pulsing with light's energy

flames carve your outline
the darkness has etched you there
to keep for itself
as it unhooks your shadow
so that you float out of reach

somewhere passed the stars
the first light still floods outwards
unchained, unafraid—
I see it in your eyes now
as the place it will return

the light in your eyes
showcases that I share you
with the cosmic light
released from the wood by flames
kindled by our devotion

your eyes hold fire's glow
a warmth only lovers know
is light from first dawn
drifting across starlit skies
as embers gleam in your eyes

embers gleam in your eyes
embers gleam in your eyes
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Edmonds  Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 1:17 AM
Beautiful poem and song, very romantic… Beryl
Anderson Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 1:52 AM
Thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes
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