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Embers Burn In Silence

Embers
burn in silence
not to disturb
our softly spoken words
and to gift us little warmth
in love's nest

Once more
in your embrace
in front of fire
sole witness of our love
making the moment stand still
eternal



© kash poet
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Placement: 2nd ;(Nov.2012)

Contest:Views from a Vignette

Sponsor:Nette Onclaud



##vignette: a hexastich in 6 lines with 2-4-4-6-7-3 syllable count per line, unrhymed.. there are a few approaches of this genre, but let’s go for the short version… a vignette focuses on ONE  mood, character, setting, or object to paint a picture of a moment in time in a SUBTLE MANNER… please use the visual  below as your thematic concept…



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Debbie Guzzi

December 1, 2012 at 2:31 PM

What a wonderful scene! so charming! Light & Love

Isaiah Zerbst

November 17, 2012 at 8:40 AM

What a peaceful poem. It brings back fond memories of sitting by a fire.

Poet Destroyer A

November 11, 2012 at 10:54 AM

Kash, CONGRATULATIONS, in Nette's "VIEWS FROM A VIGNETTE" contest.. Keep up the good work... always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

November 11, 2012 at 10:43 AM

Hey, I thought I had viewed this winners list but I don't see my congrats for you. CONGRATULATIONS

Carrie Richards

November 9, 2012 at 8:03 PM

I loved this romantic take on the contest......much more hopeful, and not as sad as my own!! But it's lovely to share the spot with you....Hooray for that!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 9, 2012 at 7:56 PM

SUPER CONGRATS KASH ON A FABULOUS WIN FOR A MESMERIZING WRITE LUV .. I AM STILL HAVING SO MANY PROBLEMS COMMENTING BACK TO ALL POETS LUV .. TPS WORKING ON IT .. TOO SLOW FOR ME ..HAHA

Tanya Harrington

November 9, 2012 at 12:22 PM

Congrats Kash. Eternal warmth in a moment. Love it. :) Tanya

Sara Kendrick

November 9, 2012 at 11:56 AM

Soft spoken winning work..Congrats..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

November 9, 2012 at 8:01 AM

Dreamy..etheral as are so many of your writes, you are one lucky man. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 9, 2012 at 8:00 AM

Another superb win, congratulations Kash xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 9, 2012 at 7:15 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Vignette contest Kash. Love, Carol

Laura Breidenthal

November 8, 2012 at 9:03 PM

Well, that little ember of a piece definably warmed ME up. ;) I gottah say, I really enjoyed reading some of your work today. Thanks for stopping by to read one of my poems! Means a lot. Always, Laura

Wilma Neels

November 7, 2012 at 11:22 AM

Kash, I just love the scene you bring forth here, got me all smiles here. I will try and change the avatar in the morning ;)

Sara Kendrick

November 6, 2012 at 12:30 PM

Reads like a winning Vignette..Of course, I am not sure about the correctness on one...Very passionate work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by...Your presence at my ork is always uplifting.Sara

Andrea Dietrich

November 6, 2012 at 7:38 AM

everything is normal again. WHEWWW

Andrea Dietrich

November 5, 2012 at 11:24 PM

Kash, I lost my member area and ALL my soupmails and I am unable to post to blogs or to post a poem. What's up?? Do you still have your functions here? I feel really helpless not being able to post blogs or poems.

Nette Onclaud

November 5, 2012 at 5:41 PM

are you in the north pole... appear!..:) huggs, kashi!

Andrea Dietrich

November 5, 2012 at 3:37 PM

so beautiful, Kash, sure to be in the winners' circle. My time is limited these days, but I'm doing my best and I feel bad I might not get to all my replies today! Have a great new week. Luv, andrea