Embers and Snowflakes

You are a flame licking me, aflame
with crimson fire of desire,
and crimson-crackly is the air tonight
alight and bright as the candle
that burns like our passion
but fades in the soot-stench of dawn...
embers grown cold, the incense of morning
making no sense, and left bleak inside
with a grey hollow mourning.

Ashes in the grate
grate on tenebrous threads of fate.

You are a thought brushing me, wisps
of winter snowflake-soft,
and white-blinding is the light
alight and bright as the candle
of love that slowly burned out...
fading like melting snow on the garden,
light sifting and churning,
the grey urn of morning
holding ashes of mourning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Bell Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 7:37 AM
When the fire burns life is great. When the fire burns out and the ashes are cold, life goes on hold. 26 will reflect this perfectly. You doing well.
Parker Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 8:34 PM
There is no ash between us, just ever aflame passion and desire.....completion horizon is endless. CP you are that Precious Pearl!
Puddifoot Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 8:54 AM
<3
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 8:01 AM
Very well done.A very romantic piece.Congratulations on your win in this contest.
Neumann Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 10:49 AM
Brilliant. I am holding myself some ashes of mourning and your poem resonates a lot with me.Kind wishes,Kai
Hind Avatar
March 27, 2026 at 9:04 AM
WOW. You did such a awesome job with this contest. Probably a first placement, I am thinking, <3
Parker Avatar
March 27, 2026 at 8:38 AM
reflections of a love in memory perhaps? I enjoyed this poem Charlotte...
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