Embellishment

After a long time today
Blue throated bird I saw
Cuddling psychedelic sunlight
Dating for the first time this year
Embellishing the boughs with amber moments


October 2, 2017

For Let's do some Alphabet - Poetry Contest
Hosted by: Sara Kendrick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 12:03 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..That had to be a beautiful sight to see the birds in spring prepare to nest..Sara
Gupta Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:31 AM
Thank you so much ... Your ABC contest I enjoyed very much ... Thank you for liking the poem ...
Callus Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 1:53 PM
What a lovely image you have created, Probir! The 3rd and 5th lines in particular stand out. Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul
Gupta Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Thanks , Paul ... Luckily the sentences arrived ... Regards ... probir ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your win with a beautiful poem.
Gupta Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thank you ...
Barden Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Probir - blessings and keep up the great work! :-)
Gupta Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Glorious writing my friend, Probir! A fave for me!
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 12:37 PM
Thank you, Demetrios ... Certainly not as glorious as a flower of yours ...
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Birds dating--very creative and original!
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 12:41 PM
Well ... Doesn't a bird date with sunshine ... especially for a poet like you with high sensibility quotient ... Thanks for your kind comment ...
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