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Embellishment

After a long time today
Blue throated bird I saw
Cuddling psychedelic sunlight
Dating for the first time this year
Embellishing the boughs with amber moments


October 2, 2017

For Let's do some Alphabet - Poetry Contest
Hosted by: Sara Kendrick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/12/2017 12:03:00 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..That had to be a beautiful sight to see the birds in spring prepare to nest..Sara
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/13/2017 5:31:00 AM
Thank you so much ... Your ABC contest I enjoyed very much ... Thank you for liking the poem ...
Date: 10/11/2017 1:53:00 PM
What a lovely image you have created, Probir! The 3rd and 5th lines in particular stand out. Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/12/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thanks , Paul ... Luckily the sentences arrived ... Regards ... probir ...
Date: 10/11/2017 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with a beautiful poem.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/11/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/10/2017 10:50:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Probir - blessings and keep up the great work! :-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/11/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/3/2017 7:35:00 AM
Glorious writing my friend, Probir! A fave for me!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/3/2017 12:37:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios ... Certainly not as glorious as a flower of yours ...
Date: 10/2/2017 8:24:00 AM
Birds dating--very creative and original!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/3/2017 12:41:00 PM
Well ... Doesn't a bird date with sunshine ... especially for a poet like you with high sensibility quotient ... Thanks for your kind comment ...

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