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Honesty is always the best policy because when the truth comes out the very fact that everyone knows you told an untruth is embarrassing to say the least.

Sometimes to make more interesting, A story being told, Some folks will try to enhance it, To make it sound more bold. Sometimes when we're relating, An experience one's had, Certain things are added, To enhance the good or bad. Often when retelling, Some newsy bit of info, A supposition can slip in. The story changes, bingo. Whether to make it exciting, To help or hinder tried, It isn't simple embellishment. The truth is that you lied.

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Date: 2/2/2021 11:13:00 AM
A poem about a "fish story" told by many fisherman. "It was a real big one, so big, that it broke my line and got away". Enjoyed this poem very much.
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Date: 1/26/2021 7:19:00 PM
Love it --- Truth and Lies... Lies, in truth! I only ate one Baby Ruth... lol... A lie becomes a fib or a stretcher. A fib becomes the truth. The Truth is Engraved in Stone! ... Orwellian, isn't it?! ~ gw
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/27/2021 11:07:00 AM
Thanks bunches my friend. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/26/2021 5:35:00 AM
It is very rare that I write about myself. My poems are fiction and as such they cannot be considered lies. In my life I rarely told a lie. I believe in coming clean. ~~
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/26/2021 6:52:00 AM
Excellent Victor. Always thought you were a right on kinda guy. Thanks bunches my friend. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/26/2021 3:12:00 AM
I write fiction sometimes but try so hard to keep from lying... yet I know I do lie sometimes just to keep from hurting someone's feelings.. God bless you always with love and prayers
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/26/2021 3:40:00 AM
Thanks Bunches Gina. God Bless, JB

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