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Embellished Doll

a lullaby fell on the chin of mine
it had the symphony of memories
that plunged me in to her arms
yes my mother.
she plundered my sorrows
and poured in to her throat,
it throttled her,stifled her
but a smile pervaded her face
she plunged in to mirage
yes,i placed her as my slave
as she opened the windows for me
just like a stream i flowed
till i reached the valley of silence.
she overturned my interpretation.
about the world and existence.
she put me on her lap
and hugged me a lot.
she sprayedme with the beauty of love,
as i crafted the word mom in me.
my enchanted doll with life restricted
has been taken away from me.
by someone to some unknown land
to join the almighty hand in hand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/10/2016 10:42:00 AM
a very moving poem Sneha:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/6/2016 10:59:00 PM
Sneha, Nice to see your poem showcased in Justin's "Where Freedom Finds The Fire Contest List." Love LINDA
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Date: 4/10/2016 5:33:00 AM
i'm so excited to hear such appreciation from you.thanks
Date: 4/6/2016 2:34:00 AM
Congrats on a worthy win sneha..
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Date: 3/22/2016 8:39:00 AM
Happy for your return little one! Light & Love
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:22:00 PM
Hi Sneha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/11/2015 2:20:00 PM
You write amazing free verse, my friend. Sneha, I'm deeply moved by your poem. You express your feelings well. You are blessed to have such memories, sad but the hold was there. HUGS. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:33:00 AM
You are such a talented poet. Have you ever published a book-length anthology? 7++!
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:33:00 AM
Excellent. Very thoughtful write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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