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Embarrassing Eclipse

Bypassing blue blushes pink as sizzling sun slides behind.

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Andrea Dietrich

April 21, 2018 at 5:22 PM

You used great alliteration, Jean. I am checking them all out again and saying congratulations.

Jean Murray

April 21, 2018 at 5:31 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 21, 2018 at 6:32 AM

- Congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

April 21, 2018 at 11:16 AM

Thank you Sunshine.

Susan Gentry

April 21, 2018 at 12:55 AM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

Jean Murray

April 21, 2018 at 11:16 AM

Thank you Susan.

Connie Marcum Wong

April 9, 2018 at 5:52 PM

Excellent Jean! It is multidimensional and possibly metaphorical simultaneously. : )

Jean Murray

April 9, 2018 at 6:13 PM

Lovely to see you again Connie.Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2018 at 1:26 AM

- Excellent words for this picture, Jean :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

April 9, 2018 at 2:55 AM

It is a happy Monday now I see you Sunshine.

Viv Wigley

April 8, 2018 at 10:51 PM

Love it, Jean, hugely descriptive and all in one line. Cue applause (sound of chips frying)....... Viv x

Jean Murray

April 9, 2018 at 2:52 AM

Is that what applaud sounds like? I never knew.

Caren Krutsinger

April 8, 2018 at 9:04 PM

Blue bushes have never made so much sense before this poem, Jean. Curiously, they make complete sense now. Sizzling sun, slides. Alliteration if you ask me. Pretty poetry, Jean. Nice!

Jean Murray

April 9, 2018 at 2:51 AM

Thank you Caren. I have a one track mind.