Embarassed

A sensual, lioness, with a poor constitution, hopes dissociation from her abode will repair the echo of her dreams.

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Date: 7/8/2019 4:44:00 PM

Great idea for the contest, Ann. You've come up with a challenge within the original challenge. Nicely done. :) gw

Ann Foster
Date: 7/8/2019 5:32:00 PM

:) You are so sweet. Thank you, my friend. Ann

Date: 7/7/2019 4:30:00 PM

I'm intrigued by the quality of this verse. Brilliant write.. James

Ann Foster
Date: 7/7/2019 5:50:00 PM

You are the best thank you. Just having so much fun. I love all the kind people here. Ann

Date: 7/7/2019 11:38:00 AM

Hi Ann: A short but nicely done poem! My version reads like the bible compare to you. Did you post the contest and the contest giver?

Ann Foster
Date: 7/7/2019 12:43:00 PM

No. Sorry. I did not. Thank you for saying. I was just having fun. Hope you have a super day! Ann

Date: 7/6/2019 7:10:00 PM

now that is what I call BREVITY and Succinctness!! Great job with the eight words.

Ann Foster
Date: 7/6/2019 9:12:00 PM

I was trying to adhere to the rules... I love games. Thank you... Ann

Date: 7/6/2019 7:22:00 AM

if it possible she would...A very interesting write...

Ann Foster
Date: 7/6/2019 1:42:00 PM

Just fun. I love word games. Ann