D.W. Rodgers Poet Free verse

Email From Christ

God's revelation,
until I looked carefully
an extra 'i' at the end,
Christi not Christ and
she'd been waiting at home for
long weeks, with no, well you know
exactly what she's
talking about and she had
some photos for me before
I clicked the delete button.


Started as a haiku, then tanka but just kept on going 

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Sara Kendrick September 23, 2020 at 3:38 PM Well, good poetry is supposed to leave us with questions so this is good poetry. Your presence at my page was uplifting. Sara D.W. Rodgers September 23, 2020 at 7:07 PM Thanks Sara, it takes all types and this was fun.

Daisy Ward July 12, 2020 at 11:17 AM NICE BUT ALSO INTERESTING. D.W. Rodgers July 12, 2020 at 5:02 PM Thanks Daisy

Andrea Dietrich July 9, 2020 at 8:29 PM oh my, I had to reread this one and then I got it and I really LIKED it! D.W. Rodgers July 9, 2020 at 9:04 PM Thanks Andrea, glad you liked it, it is based on a real junk email.

Imran Islam July 8, 2020 at 12:48 PM Lovely write, D.W. Stay safe! D.W. Rodgers July 9, 2020 at 6:51 AM Thanks L.P.

Paula Goldsmith July 8, 2020 at 11:59 AM A Cute Write. If only we could e-mail "Christ." I have a list of questions waiting for that e-mail address. Enjoy your day............... D.W. Rodgers July 8, 2020 at 12:49 PM Thanks Paula, yes it might make things easier if Heaven was on the internet, but you never know. Chers Dave

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 7, 2020 at 11:14 AM This made me giggle ;), D.W. Rodgers July 7, 2020 at 12:42 PM Good that was it's intention. Thanks for looking Dave