Email From Christ

God's revelation,
until I looked carefully
an extra 'i' at the end,
Christi not Christ and
she'd been waiting at home for
long weeks, with no, well you know
exactly what she's
talking about and she had
some photos for me before
I clicked the delete button.


Started as a haiku, then tanka but just kept on going 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 9/23/2020 3:38:00 PM
Well, good poetry is supposed to leave us with questions so this is good poetry. Your presence at my page was uplifting. Sara
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 9/23/2020 7:07:00 PM
Thanks Sara, it takes all types and this was fun.
Date: 7/12/2020 11:17:00 AM
NICE BUT ALSO INTERESTING.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/12/2020 5:02:00 PM
Thanks Daisy
Date: 7/9/2020 8:29:00 PM
oh my, I had to reread this one and then I got it and I really LIKED it!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/9/2020 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, glad you liked it, it is based on a real junk email.
Date: 7/8/2020 12:48:00 PM
Lovely write, D.W. Stay safe!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/9/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thanks L.P.
Date: 7/8/2020 11:59:00 AM
A Cute Write. If only we could e-mail "Christ." I have a list of questions waiting for that e-mail address. Enjoy your day...............
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/8/2020 12:49:00 PM
Thanks Paula, yes it might make things easier if Heaven was on the internet, but you never know. Chers Dave
Date: 7/7/2020 11:14:00 AM
This made me giggle ;),
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/7/2020 12:42:00 PM
Good that was it's intention. Thanks for looking Dave
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