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Elvis Presley, Graceland

Hair black as snow's An awkward crooked. Smile, to boot his stiffer Upper lips of red wine. His gorgeous swagger, Lingered all the young Girls battle to snuff About. Songs of the KING of rock n' roll Love me tender, jailhouse rock, Girl happy, Frankfort special, Blue Hawaii, g.i. Blues. Ect. His voice left you wanting More ELVIS PRESLEY, GRACELAND is the true, KING of ROCK N' ROLL. His music will NEVER DIE: It's an inspiration that will, And has lasted a decade entirely Forever. Entered in contest what songwriters inspire; or writers inspire you???? Sponsored by: Michael J. Falotico

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Date: 7/2/2012 2:43:00 PM
Nice tribute to Elvis. However, your first line has a questionable item. "Hair black as snow's"? For as long as I can remember, snow has appeared white in color. Are you sure you don't mean "crows" instead of "snow's"?
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 7/2/2012 8:40:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comment Robert, Elvis is the true king for sure... Btw I wasn't actually talking about snow it was snow white's hair..... Lol!!!!
Date: 6/30/2012 7:46:00 PM
nice entry, good luck in the contest.
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 7/1/2012 9:15:00 PM
Thank you situation.
Date: 6/29/2012 12:36:00 AM
nice tribute to Elvis ''the King '' .thank you for sharing .jk
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 7/1/2012 9:14:00 PM
Thank you jk
Date: 6/28/2012 7:15:00 PM
He's DEFINITELY immortal! Good luck in the contest, Sweet N Sour <3
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/28/2012 9:01:00 PM
Thanks Britt, yes he is grew up listening to him, along with Bob Marlrey, michael jackson... They are all great musicians for sure....
Date: 6/28/2012 2:23:00 PM
wow my writer,loved it glad you entered
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/28/2012 4:00:00 PM
Im very honored that your writer enjoyed my poem Richie, I wasn't sure if I wanted to enter but took the risk.... Glad I did to now!!!! Xox0
Date: 6/28/2012 6:35:00 AM
wonderfully written and expressed. bravo. laurel
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/28/2012 3:57:00 PM
Thank You Laurel, L.

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