Carma Sanderson Poet Verse

Elvis Presley, Graceland

Hair black as snow's
An awkward crooked.                            
Smile, to boot his stiffer
Upper lips of red wine.

His gorgeous swagger,
Lingered all the young
Girls battle to snuff
About.                                                         Songs of the KING of rock n' roll
                                                                      Love me tender, jailhouse rock,
                                                                       Girl happy, Frankfort special,
                                                                          Blue Hawaii, g.i. Blues. Ect.

His voice left you wanting
More ELVIS PRESLEY,
GRACELAND is the true,
KING of ROCK N' ROLL.

His music will NEVER DIE:
It's an inspiration that will,
And has lasted a decade entirely
Forever.

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Robert Pettit July 2, 2012 at 2:43 PM Nice tribute to Elvis. However, your first line has a questionable item. "Hair black as snow's"? For as long as I can remember, snow has appeared white in color. Are you sure you don't mean "crows" instead of "snow's"? Carma Sanderson July 2, 2012 at 8:40 PM Thank you for the wonderful comment Robert, Elvis is the true king for sure... Btw I wasn't actually talking about snow it was snow white's hair..... Lol!!!!

The Situation June 30, 2012 at 7:46 PM nice entry, good luck in the contest. Carma Sanderson July 1, 2012 at 9:15 PM Thank you situation.

Jayachandran Chakrapany June 29, 2012 at 12:36 AM nice tribute to Elvis ''the King '' .thank you for sharing .jk Carma Sanderson July 1, 2012 at 9:14 PM Thank you jk

Justcallme Britt June 28, 2012 at 7:15 PM He's DEFINITELY immortal! Good luck in the contest, Sweet N Sour <3 Carma Sanderson June 28, 2012 at 9:01 PM Thanks Britt, yes he is grew up listening to him, along with Bob Marlrey, michael jackson... They are all great musicians for sure....

Richard Palmer June 28, 2012 at 2:23 PM wow my writer,loved it glad you entered Carma Sanderson June 28, 2012 at 4:00 PM Im very honored that your writer enjoyed my poem Richie, I wasn't sure if I wanted to enter but took the risk.... Glad I did to now!!!! Xox0

Laurel Larison June 28, 2012 at 6:35 AM wonderfully written and expressed. bravo. laurel Carma Sanderson June 28, 2012 at 3:57 PM Thank You Laurel, L.