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Elusive Nymph

Seclusion, where waters sway Moonlight gleams upon the spray Here I sit alone and wait For my love, but she is late Then at last I see her there Flowing dress, cascading hair She approaches, we embrace I can feel my pulses race Undulation of her hips There is hunger in her lips She takes charge, she leads the way I submit to sensual play Time flies by, does not exist She knows well I can’t resist To the hold she has on me She will never set me free I give in, become her slave Then we ride the final wave Till satiated on the sand I reach out to take her hand But beside me it’s all bare: She is not there. Author: Paul Callus ~ 28 Feb 2014 Contest: Impress me with a small poem II Sponsor: Giorgio A.V. Motif: Romantic First Place win

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/29/2017 8:09:00 PM

Paul, I just could't resist the title. I had to satisfy my curiosity and take a look... and I'm so glad I did! I love the fantasy and flow to your sensual, romantic poem. Your stirring imagery enticed my senses as I was charmed by your poetic lines. What pixie dust this elusive nymph did cast, I was spellbound till the end... Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 11/30/2017 11:29:00 AM

Apart from other things, titles are meant to catch the reader's attention and curiosity. There is always the chance that the poem itself won't live up to expectations, but that's a risk worth taking! As you have already noticed this one is wholly based on fantasy; glad that the pixie dust worked for you, Susan:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/12/2016 4:27:00 AM

I'm impressed w/this lilting love poem, Paul. Those who become addicted to pleasure, can never accept the finality of aforementioned brief encounters. Thus, the highs become the lows. Very entertaining write. Love the ending best of all. Great line. Love and best wishes to you.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/12/2016 10:49:00 AM

Always a pleasure to read your crafted feedback, Freddie! So pleased that you enjoyed this poem, one of the first I posted on Soup nearly 3 years ago. May I take this opportunity to wish you and your loved ones a very JOYOUS & BLESSED CHRISTMAS. // PAUL

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/11/2015 8:42:00 AM

A joy to have found this gem this fine morn my good friend! I see long ago that this took first place and think yes , justice served as its a great poem. Judged by a great poet- Giorgio too. Super 7 on this one my friend..

Paul Callus
Date: 9/12/2015 2:48:00 PM

Thank you for going back to read one of my older posts, Robert. I am so pleased that you like it; it's one of my favourites. The high rating is also appreciated. All the best. // paul

Julia Ward

Date: 3/27/2015 2:38:00 PM

"She is not there", and now the deflation... A marvellous poem worthy of my 7. Hugs, Julia, xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/28/2015 2:28:00 PM

Thank you Julia. The high rating supports your 'marvellous' comment! Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/29/2014 6:58:00 PM

Back to read some of your older write...ah...but I see I've been here before. :) You submit to sensual play....Well, that's quite the line, Paul. Lovely write. I'm impressed...again.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/30/2014 4:52:00 AM

It's lovely to have you re-visiting, Eileen. From time to time I too re-visit my own posts to assess if the passage of time has had any effect on them:) hugs // paul

Inner Whispers

Date: 3/19/2014 6:31:00 AM

this reminds me of my very first poem i made...

Paul Callus
Date: 3/19/2014 6:56:00 AM

Hi, nice to have you back again! Now I'll have to go and look up that poem of yours...you got me curious :) // paul

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/18/2014 11:16:00 AM

Great piece Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/18/2014 11:43:00 AM

Hi Keith, thanks. welcome to visit anytime. // paul

Varenya Raina

Date: 3/8/2014 11:23:00 AM

Sensual! And attractive!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/8/2014 2:02:00 PM

Thank you Varenya for both adjectives describing the poem; much appreciated...the visit as well :) ... paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2014 8:34:00 PM

this is really nice, Paul and the sad twist at the end. WEll done. Congrats on your win

Paul Callus
Date: 3/7/2014 9:27:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thanks for both comments. Glad you liked this poem. cu around. // paul

Leon Enriquez

Date: 3/6/2014 3:55:00 PM

Dear Paul: I like this poem. Very nice rhythm. Thanks and all the best. Leon

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2014 4:07:00 PM

Thank you Leon both for visiting and comment. // paul

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/6/2014 10:21:00 AM

Beautifully worded.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2014 10:33:00 AM

Thank you. // paul

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 3/5/2014 1:09:00 PM

A beautiful write!! Congrats on the win!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2014 1:36:00 PM

Thank you so very much. cu around more often. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2014 7:27:00 AM

- Paul, congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2014 11:02:00 AM

Anne Lise, I humbly bathe in your flattering comment. :) // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 3/5/2014 6:24:00 AM

Congrats on the worthy win Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2014 11:01:00 AM

Thank you very much. It made my day!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/5/2014 5:14:00 AM

Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, paul

Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2014 5:23:00 AM

Thank you. Welcome to my post; hope to see you dropping by more often. // paul

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/2/2014 5:13:00 AM

"Sweet dreams are made of this." Beautifully written Paul :)... Enjoyed reading this piece... Verlena

Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2014 7:49:00 AM

Thank you Verlana. Glad you enjoyed it. Encouraging remarks build up a healthy ego:) paul

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/1/2014 7:30:00 PM

Sensual poem with a surprise ending. Enjoyable read.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2014 4:25:00 AM

Hi Juliet. Welcome to my posts. Txs for the comment. Will be back to you soon.// paul

Ken Carroll

Date: 3/1/2014 5:56:00 PM

Nice romantic write! Thanks for your visit to my page..

Paul Callus
Date: 3/1/2014 6:00:00 PM

Thanks. Pop in any time...you're wlecome.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/1/2014 4:16:00 PM

Wow!!! I loved this write.....sensual and sweet....beautiful....

Paul Callus
Date: 3/1/2014 4:30:00 PM

Thank you Eileen; coming from you these comments really are something! (That's the result of reading RL and EG !!! :) /x/ paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/1/2014 12:37:00 PM

This is a romatic tradgedy, I was enthralled through the whole write! Magnificent piece.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2014 2:47:00 PM

You misunderstand, I am giving you praise, I love it.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/1/2014 2:29:00 PM

Txs Your positive criticism is much appreciated. You're welcome to visit anytime...paul

James Kelley

Date: 3/1/2014 5:10:00 AM

I love this, great wordplay...this evoked a great amount of emotion...very well done

Paul Callus
Date: 3/1/2014 5:23:00 AM

Thanks James, pleased you liked it. I believe in poetry that reaches the heart in a simple easy flow, while leaving ample space for the reader's fantasy. Will be popping in to read some of your works, now that we crossed roads....paul

Vera Duggan

Date: 3/1/2014 12:30:00 AM

Oh! Paul what a beautiful romantic poem and her not being there how sad maybe if you tried sitting on the sand she may eventuate.............Vera............

Paul Callus
Date: 3/1/2014 5:01:00 AM

Hi Vera, I am glad you liked it. Seems like it made a hit with the Duggans! :) Always welcome to visit. /x/ ... paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/28/2014 3:08:00 PM

A beautiful poem with a very sad ending..Love can fill our thought with illusions especially when distance stands between two beating hearts.Romantic indeed!!Charma

Paul Callus
Date: 2/28/2014 3:23:00 PM

I'm glad you liked it. I have faith in your judgement and look forward to your comments. Thanks for visiting. // paul