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Elusive Happiness

French kiss in the air That never brushes her cheek The plastic cheesecake that looks good enough to eat Roses that wilt before they arrive at her door The man that always needs more Than just her love to keep him satisfied The sigh that never really slips pass her barely parted lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/2/2008 9:55:00 AM
This is wonderful, the very wording of this poem is elusive in itself, it makes you wonder where it could go from there, leaves you longing, well done, thankyou for the wonderful comments on my work, keep the poems coming, Mark
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