Kim Merryman Poet Shadorma

Elusive Dreams

Rainbow dreams
                                                         elusively drift
                                                           out of sight,
                                                       slipping through
                                                   reality's stark fingers,
                                                     never fully grasped.

7/8/12

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Tanya Harrington August 14, 2012 at 1:06 PM Love it! Hope I can do one half as wonderful. :) Tanya

The Situation July 13, 2012 at 6:07 PM and that the way it is.

Sara Kendrick July 13, 2012 at 2:09 PM Great one..Very expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Joseph May July 13, 2012 at 1:59 PM a wonderful poem Kim...thanks for sharing...hugs..Joseph

Denise Minney July 11, 2012 at 6:43 AM beautiful :-)

Ilene Bauer July 9, 2012 at 5:25 PM nice one, kim! very beautifully expressed...

Jack Horne July 9, 2012 at 10:39 AM beautiful write, Kim - interesting form too (I must try it)

Poet Destroyer A July 8, 2012 at 8:50 PM KIm, i love your verse...pd

Gwendolen Song July 8, 2012 at 8:48 PM Reality should be more kind! I seem to dream in black and white. I love your shadorma! gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2012 at 7:39 PM this shadorma is SUPERB. Wish I'd thought of this!!

Joann Grisetti July 8, 2012 at 6:24 PM Lovely poem; rainbows are slippery things.