Elusive Dreams

Outside my window,
the leaves are in a frenzy~
twirling, shaking and flying about 
the wind just sending them off
in a scattered dance...
so similar to the
thoughts
chaotic in my mind

Sleep comes around,
but the dreams do not.

Or do they?
And I've forgotten them yet again.

They are but fleeting wisps for me...
iridescent ribbons of subconsciousness
winding through me, 
teasing,
then eluding me

When I try to touch them,
my fingers ripple through a smoky haze
So real to me, yet intangible

Sometimes I wonder
whether I could pour something
over these dreams,
Splash! And they crackle,
crystallizing them, finally captured
Smooth, sharp, tangible

and then I change my mind,
since it doesn't feel right...

Like caging something
to admire its beauty

Somehow, even the word dream
seems so ethereal to me,
they are but soft whispers
weaving through my slumbering self

My dreams, 
they have a voice
so melodic, yet incomparable
so beautiful, yet unrecoverable

My dreams,
they come in color
so alive, yet muted
so alive, yet unreal

My head touches the pillow,
and I sink into slumber,
a myriad of thoughts finally settling down,
as undulating curls of dreams rise up around me

Come to think of it,
this creates for me such a
fascinating image...

Myself enveloped in darkness,
with wispy colorful ribbons
floating by all around me
as I dream on...
a quick reprieve from reality



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Andresen Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 2:53 PM
Beautiful dreams nikko.....Good night,sleep well.OXOX Anne-Lise
A   Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 10:08 AM
ok i am really too stupid most of the times
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 10:15 PM
So I see this is getting congrats on being featured.Congrats,Nikko. I am so hurting right now but i have just a few comments to go. I cannot afford to miss even one day here. hahha. LUv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 10:15 PM
and thanks for your wonderful comments as usual these past few days.
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 10:06 AM
I love this clever write on dreams, Nikko.
A   Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 12:59 AM
wow! very elusive... and smooth .... i can listen to "peer gynt" at the window... looking out waiting for reality... wow! fits what i'm thinking... adding this to my favorites... ha ha ha! only cause this buttered up my thoughts, and i wish to read to my family... have a nice one,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Nikko. Love, Carol
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 1:21 AM
Nikko how the heck do you do that? That is so impressive to write like that-to have such a vision and put it down in print! Thanks for your kind comments and I'm sorry that I got Chris started in chemist mode :) Maybe the two of you can help me accomplish my goal of memorizing all of the symbols-sounds like you know a bunch too!
Wesley Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 12:05 AM
So glad I was able to read this before going to bed. It will take me to dreamland in the nicest way possile!
Anish Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 7:11 PM
Dreams are fascinating - yet so elusive as you show in your poem. Fine surrealist poem! Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
Mantle Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 3:33 PM
congrats on your win. loved your use of expression in this write. Best wishes Em :)
Castro Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 3:04 AM
love the visuals great poem 7up
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 1:43 AM
hi, there, nikko. took an oxy tonight so I could sit here and type. haha. I don't scream like a baby when frightened. I think I just shot up in bed! Guess what I had watched the night i had that nightmare? The movie Carrie!! Do you know it? it starred Sissy Spacek as a crazy girl with telephathic powers and she set her high school on fire.
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 12:32 AM
Nikko, I think I missed this one earlier. Wow, what a great write. You know, you are someone who has a very distinctive style. I think if I were doing a free verse contest, I would always know it was you writing becuase you tell your thoughts in such a personal and straighforward way, while also mixing in wonderful images. WEll deserved win, my friend!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 10:38 PM
Congrats Nikko sweet friend on your big win with this magnficent poetry luv... bravo on dreams..
Villanueva Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 7:54 PM
CONGRATULATIONS my friend Nikko~~~~a well-deserved 3rd placement in the contest~~~smile and cheer~~~~*-*junjun
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 7:38 PM
Congrats on your win with this great work..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Dream On" contest Nikko. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Unique is the perfect description of your work. I found it interesting and mesmerizing. Lee
Richards Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 6:15 PM
I love to read your poetry, Nikko....! It always has a way of wrapping itself around and around....making perfect sense....but almost not....making me wonder what was meant, in part...but it never matters!! Fluid and lovely and always uniquely yours! Congrats!
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Well written nikko. Congratulations on your win
Brown Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 12:39 PM
What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Nikko. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol
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