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Elusive Annelid

I am a squiggly, slimy annelid. I live my life above and underground. I’m long and slim; I've no eyes or eyelids. My life has many, many, ups and downs. In my earthen home made of dirt and stone This is my terrestrial element. Here I’m safe and sound and I’m all alone Morning mist entices my next ascent. Here above I lie in grassy wetness. Danger lurking, searching from the trees: It’s my nemesis: the robin redbreast Who's waiting patiently to pounce on me. I’m a survivalist I now affirm That bird above won’t eat this little worm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/16/2010 2:10:00 PM
Had to look up "annelid," Albert. Reminds me of the three or four enormous crows that lived in an enormous pine next door. I oftened wondered what they were crowing about so loudly. Yep. They spotted an annelid. Congrats on this dark humor being featured. Dave
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Date: 11/16/2010 11:50:00 AM
Albert, congratulayions on having your poem featured this week.. here enjoying all featured poems. Have a nice day,..p.d.
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Albert. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 2:21:00 PM
Congrats Albert on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one and special piece to share with us all with luv today..
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