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Elucidations of a Primal Being

CANTOS I (Tract I) The woods were stirring,and the stars twinkling, the wind whispering a thousand new breezes; ....if a sound came, it came with smiles ----- and if it spoke it would call me friend.... and I would call it mother, or brother or sister, or God? Dare I say 'God' for such a simple thing? ---- But what I feel is as real as any science.... something behind the green curtain; .... Something, under the speck of flower shoots, that bloom as ornate as any chic-portrait or seem to thrust higher than man's great skyscrapers, speckled anew each spring, for mine eyes, and yours and the world's Dare I say 'God?' (Who Reveals)

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Date: 6/20/2016 1:57:00 PM
Your poem speaks eloquently of a mystical feeling. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/25/2016 11:58:00 AM
- Enjoy reading this fabulous poem, Keith ... a gem in my eyes - Powerfully with emotions ... speak volumes - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 6/3/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! Always appreciate your visit! Hugs back Keith;-)
Date: 5/24/2016 5:44:00 PM
Sorry that I am so late reading this beautiful and truly profound piece. Depth , imagery and power blows me away my friend. A7 and added tom y fav list as its a true and very deep gem..
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 6/3/2016 12:20:00 PM
Many needed thanks Robert, you are the few who UNDERSTANDS Keith;-)

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