Lonna Blodgett Poet Rhyme

Elsewhere

Gusts upon the green blades buzzing with synergy
While morning sun rays placed its striped bee patterns
Cast upon my face like some radiant Zebra energy
From across the universal rings of Saturn


excerpted from "Saturn's" Rings posted May 2019 on 4-22-20
for Rithimus Divisa 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Gregory Barden

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Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2020 at 2:54 PM so cool, that zebra imagery. Very unique! Lonna Blodgett May 7, 2020 at 10:12 PM Hello Andrea, sorry its taken so long to express my appreciation for your visit. Thanks as always so good to hear your words.....

Sandra Adams April 25, 2020 at 10:39 PM great imagery in this one...wonderful choice for the contest I think... best wishes... hugs Lonna Blodgett April 25, 2020 at 10:40 PM Thank you Sandra! Blessings and Hugs to you.

Vijay Pandit April 25, 2020 at 3:19 PM Exquisite imagery in your words: green blades buzzing..striped bee patterns...I enjoyed the scene you evoked, Lonna. Lonna Blodgett April 25, 2020 at 10:24 PM Thanks so much Vijay. I loved writing this as it took me to another place while being right there.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 25, 2020 at 12:19 PM Inspirational poem that imprints with its dynamism its beauty upon the reader's mind dearest, Lonna. Blessings. Take care! Lonna Blodgett April 25, 2020 at 10:25 PM What a nice surprise you visit is. Thank you for taking the time to show your enjoyment. Blessings to you

Richard Lamoureux April 25, 2020 at 12:14 PM Great imagery, good luck in the contest. Blessings Rick. Lonna Blodgett April 25, 2020 at 10:42 PM Blessings to you Rick as well. thank you for the kind comment.

Susan Ashley April 24, 2020 at 10:27 AM Wow! Such artistic strength in such a short poem, Lonna. Simply amazing in its creative energy and beauty that thrills my imagination and satisfies my soul. A must fav! Best wishes for a win and my warmest wishes for you, dear poetess.. ~Susan Lonna Blodgett April 25, 2020 at 10:40 PM Susan your words are wonderful always. Thank you so very much.

Paul Callus April 23, 2020 at 5:03 PM You chose a most striking stanza, Lonna; somehow reminds me of Keats! Regards / paul Lonna Blodgett April 25, 2020 at 10:42 PM Thank you Paul. I am very flattered.

Caren Krutsinger April 23, 2020 at 6:44 AM Lonna, this is a poem that is buzzing; the continuation of the letter z from buzzing to zebra somehow intrigued me, catching the tt's in patterns along with bee on the way. There is such energy in this one! Do not change a single thing! Lonna Blodgett April 25, 2020 at 10:22 PM Hi Caren. Thank you for the BUZZ!!!!

Eve Roper April 22, 2020 at 9:43 PM Great imagery, Lonna, good verse for Greg's contest and good luck. Hugs Eve Lonna Blodgett April 25, 2020 at 10:22 PM Thank you Eve. This one was a fun write.