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Gusts upon the green blades buzzing with synergy
While morning sun rays placed its striped bee patterns
Cast upon my face like some radiant Zebra energy
From across the universal rings of Saturn


excerpted from "Saturn's" Rings posted May 2019 on 4-22-20
for Rithimus Divisa 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Gregory Barden

Copyright © Lonna Blodgett | Year Posted 2020

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/26/2020 2:54:00 PM so cool, that zebra imagery. Very unique! Login to Reply Lonna Blodgett Date: 5/7/2020 10:12:00 PM Hello Andrea, sorry its taken so long to express my appreciation for your visit. Thanks as always so good to hear your words.....

Sandra Adams Date: 4/25/2020 10:39:00 PM great imagery in this one...wonderful choice for the contest I think... best wishes... hugs Login to Reply Lonna Blodgett Date: 4/25/2020 10:40:00 PM Thank you Sandra! Blessings and Hugs to you.

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/25/2020 3:19:00 PM Exquisite imagery in your words: green blades buzzing..striped bee patterns...I enjoyed the scene you evoked, Lonna. Login to Reply Lonna Blodgett Date: 4/25/2020 10:24:00 PM Thanks so much Vijay. I loved writing this as it took me to another place while being right there.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/25/2020 12:19:00 PM Inspirational poem that imprints with its dynamism its beauty upon the reader's mind dearest, Lonna. Blessings. Take care! Login to Reply Lonna Blodgett Date: 4/25/2020 10:25:00 PM What a nice surprise you visit is. Thank you for taking the time to show your enjoyment. Blessings to you

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/25/2020 12:14:00 PM Great imagery, good luck in the contest. Blessings Rick. Login to Reply Lonna Blodgett Date: 4/25/2020 10:42:00 PM Blessings to you Rick as well. thank you for the kind comment.

Susan Ashley Date: 4/24/2020 10:27:00 AM Wow! Such artistic strength in such a short poem, Lonna. Simply amazing in its creative energy and beauty that thrills my imagination and satisfies my soul. A must fav! Best wishes for a win and my warmest wishes for you, dear poetess.. ~Susan Login to Reply Lonna Blodgett Date: 4/25/2020 10:40:00 PM Susan your words are wonderful always. Thank you so very much.

Paul Callus Date: 4/23/2020 5:03:00 PM You chose a most striking stanza, Lonna; somehow reminds me of Keats! Regards / paul Login to Reply Lonna Blodgett Date: 4/25/2020 10:42:00 PM Thank you Paul. I am very flattered.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/23/2020 6:44:00 AM Lonna, this is a poem that is buzzing; the continuation of the letter z from buzzing to zebra somehow intrigued me, catching the tt's in patterns along with bee on the way. There is such energy in this one! Do not change a single thing! Login to Reply Lonna Blodgett Date: 4/25/2020 10:22:00 PM Hi Caren. Thank you for the BUZZ!!!!

Eve Roper Date: 4/22/2020 9:43:00 PM Great imagery, Lonna, good verse for Greg's contest and good luck. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Lonna Blodgett Date: 4/25/2020 10:22:00 PM Thank you Eve. This one was a fun write.