Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Sonnet

Eloquent Whispers

Eloquent Whispers

Oh hear the WHISPERING wind telling truths.
Saying to souls remember Calvary.
While WAFTING breezes…to eternity,
And hope one day all wonderers ye shall see –

FRAGRANT scented flowers, LAVENDER blooms.
Shall hear the DULCET songs from distant lands.
Perfect ELOQUENCE carries natures’ tunes.
Where SPLENDOR that is given calls creatures…stands.

A heavenly BLISS that by God was sent.
To those whose hearts feel loved and give love back.
TRANQUILITY and peace do not relent.
We live to learn life’s ways upon God’s track.

Shall we, then, march upon one narrow road?
The perfect LILT through life to God’s abode –

© Dane Smith-Johnsen
April 9, 2010

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Caryl Muzzey October 30, 2010 at 9:06 AM Congratulations on your fourth place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl

Sara Kendrick October 28, 2010 at 4:03 PM Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown October 27, 2010 at 11:04 AM Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 27, 2010 at 10:57 AM Congratulations on your win with this inspiring and beautiful sonnet Dane Ann :)--

Tahera Mannan October 26, 2010 at 9:29 PM Many congratulations Dane for this super win for this beautiful sonnet.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 26, 2010 at 6:23 PM Congratulations on this well deserved win , Dane

Carolyn Devonshire October 26, 2010 at 6:16 PM Another win for you today, dear friend. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 26, 2010 at 5:45 PM Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in Moses contest with this excellent entry and well deserved win.. enjoy sweet success and victory my friend .. hope u are feeling wonderful today with luv..

John Freeman October 26, 2010 at 5:36 PM Beautiful job, as always Dane with you top ten presentation, worthy of it's honor! Agape, Moses

Colleen Bono April 13, 2010 at 7:52 AM very nice.just wanted to say hi and hope things are well with you.

Sara Kendrick April 13, 2010 at 4:54 AM Great romantic and expressive of feeling write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Mitch White April 12, 2010 at 2:23 AM Beautifully written, the last lines are my favorite

Dr.Ram Mehta April 11, 2010 at 8:56 PM Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed the couplet

Carrie Richards April 11, 2010 at 7:20 PM A real beauty ..this poem! Filled with 10 words of pure inspiration! Good luck in the contest, Dane Ann. Love, Carrie

Laura Mckenzie April 11, 2010 at 7:00 PM Dane~ this is beautiful I hope you do really well in the contest with this one! I enjoyed it! Love Laura :)

Margaret Foster April 11, 2010 at 6:37 PM A lovely sonnet Dane. good use of the required word. a soft and gentle song of faith. well done...Margaret

Doris Culverhouse April 11, 2010 at 5:03 PM enjoyed today

Seeyam Brjmohun April 11, 2010 at 3:38 PM Is the road to salvation a narrow road? Thanks Dane :)