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Eloquent Whispers

Eloquent Whispers Oh hear the WHISPERING wind telling truths. Saying to souls remember Calvary. While WAFTING breezes…to eternity, And hope one day all wonderers ye shall see – FRAGRANT scented flowers, LAVENDER blooms. Shall hear the DULCET songs from distant lands. Perfect ELOQUENCE carries natures’ tunes. Where SPLENDOR that is given calls creatures…stands. A heavenly BLISS that by God was sent. To those whose hearts feel loved and give love back. TRANQUILITY and peace do not relent. We live to learn life’s ways upon God’s track. Shall we, then, march upon one narrow road? The perfect LILT through life to God’s abode – © Dane Smith-Johnsen April 9, 2010

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Date: 10/30/2010 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your fourth place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
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Date: 10/28/2010 4:03:00 PM
Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2010 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this inspiring and beautiful sonnet Dane Ann :)--
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:29:00 PM
Many congratulations Dane for this super win for this beautiful sonnet.
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win , Dane
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:16:00 PM
Another win for you today, dear friend. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:45:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in Moses contest with this excellent entry and well deserved win.. enjoy sweet success and victory my friend .. hope u are feeling wonderful today with luv..
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:36:00 PM
Beautiful job, as always Dane with you top ten presentation, worthy of it's honor! Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/13/2010 7:52:00 AM
very nice.just wanted to say hi and hope things are well with you.
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Date: 4/13/2010 4:54:00 AM
Great romantic and expressive of feeling write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/12/2010 2:23:00 AM
Beautifully written, the last lines are my favorite
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:56:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed the couplet
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:20:00 PM
A real beauty ..this poem! Filled with 10 words of pure inspiration! Good luck in the contest, Dane Ann. Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:00:00 PM
Dane~ this is beautiful I hope you do really well in the contest with this one! I enjoyed it! Love Laura :)
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:37:00 PM
A lovely sonnet Dane. good use of the required word. a soft and gentle song of faith. well done...Margaret
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:03:00 PM
enjoyed today
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Date: 4/11/2010 3:38:00 PM
Is the road to salvation a narrow road? Thanks Dane :)
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