Eloquent Dreaming

A journey of great expectation,
travel onward through the night.
My soul is free in this fantasy.
Feel the joy as you brace for the light.

A journey of sleep,I wait for it
to soothe my whimsical self.
In this fantasy my soul is free.
I put my troubles up on a shelf.

A journey into a sea of dreams,
the perfect peace now abides.
My soul is free in this fantasy.
I simply just float out with the tides.

A journey I'll try to remember,
a colorful picture show.
In this fantasy my soul is free.
My spirit's renewed,this much I know.



written December 30th, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 15, 2013 at 9:08 AM
Deb, :-) Congratulations in Suzette's " ZaniLa Rhyme - an exiting new contest for the holidays... " contest. Take care... PD
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January 13, 2013 at 1:41 PM
Great winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats..Sara
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January 12, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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January 12, 2013 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Deb! Love, Annalise
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January 12, 2013 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations Debbie. A great poem. Love, Joyce
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January 12, 2013 at 11:38 AM
DEB, very nice~SKAT
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January 12, 2013 at 11:00 AM
I seem to be addicted to dreaming these days, if there is such an addiction. For dreams have become an escape. Enjoyed your poem and congrats on the win !!
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January 12, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations!
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January 12, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Deb luv xx
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