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Eloquent Banter

This facile teasing, is so fluent and pleasing- Along the shore of infatuation, bringing to me a longing sensation. You banter with such ease, may all my sorrow slowly cease- Singing tunes of meaningful nights, and bringing to me sensual magical sights. Eloquently suggestive, silver-tonged and impressive- Vivid dreams of articulated words, speaking in verses only love can be heard. A fever with chills, oh, you my sweet fulfill each and every part that needs air- such freedom in the way you always care. Elegant in each touch, passion that means so much- Voluble with sincerity and inspiration, so grateful for your God-given lovely creation. Eloquent Banter; You Tease Me So Nicely Edward McCall February 9, 2018

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Date: 2/14/2018 4:12:00 PM
Well ma'am this was beautiful and you deserved the win, congrats Laura. Keep them coming.
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Laura ! Great rhymes and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/11/2018 7:13:00 PM
Back with congrats, Laura Loo.
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Date: 2/11/2018 4:20:00 PM
Hi Laura, this is quite a beautiful couplet. I knew this poem had a place as soon as I read the first stanza. Thank you for this entry and congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/11/2018 1:41:00 PM
Lovely, poem, Luloo--CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 2/9/2018 4:12:00 PM
A very pleasant read and form. Well done, Laura.
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