Eloquent

Smile ~ And, I do not know how I did it exactly but, I am so very glad that I did ~ Smile, "Beautiful Poem Dear; Stirring &, 'A Fave'" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Day 'Dear, Beautiful Doris Culverhouse,' Amid The Clarity of A Blue Skies Horizons of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Lovely Lady!":) ~

Smile ~ What a beautiful poem dear; so extremely lovely & passionate &, I like "Your Beauties" footnote for, one must never stop considering All of the different possibilities, options & reasons within this our lives....I hope that "Your Beauty" is doing splendidly this early eve in that "Lovely Georgia Land" where "Your Treasures Shine 'Beautiful Doris Culverhouse'" &, "Thank You," for "Your" lovely kind com this day dear ~ ....Cont:)

We all need the potter but are not willing to let him work..Each trial if we pass the trial test makes us better and stronger...Life is not easy for sure...Great job ...Keep working on it..Mom

This is reminiscent of Dickinson or St. Vincent Millay. It is subtle and WELL observed. Good job! Regards as always. Gerard.

Hi Doris, Get the potters wheel out so that someone special can mold your genuine loving heart with warmth and affection so that you can feel that sense of perfection as you both begin to create a true and loving heart that will never wander or leave you falling apart because they will love you with conviction as much as you will love them in return. Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts with me on my poetry today. By the way I am from the great state of Texas,Sincerely Dean :)

Perfection and eloquent what a great combination Doris.. Enjoyed this write, had me thinking.. :) Wilma

Doris, Doris ... I thank you for reading my poetry ... but O that I was as eloquent as you. Astoundingly beautiful, my dear

Nice inner introspective thoughts, Doris

The flickering flame, i used this often in my own poetry, it goes so well with this Eloquent masterpiece. Harry

Well, if you are still thinking, I say "you are in the right dirction" with this one. I really like it! Luv, Andrea

Beautiful imagery...eloquent words....Audrey

I think Carolyn is right with the "free verse". Great write however. Nice going. Keep thinking. xxxRalph

Eloquent words indeed, Doris. I think this would qualify as free verse. Love your little note at the end. Best wishes, Carolyn