Ellip Contest

babbling brook
poetry
in motion

plant a seed
earth is moist
love must grow

smile on face
big secret
not sharing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gigno Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 8:37 PM
!!! = shorthand for excellent
Roberts Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 1:27 AM
Think i forgot to enter in contest, ah well another time.
Roberts Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 10:02 PM
Dont understand, can you explain
A   Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 2:37 PM
wow..this is a nice poem..pd
Roberts Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Thank you PD
Veetil Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Nicely done Seren, loved the concept .... good luck in the contest
Roberts Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Thanking you Mehnaz
Williams Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 12:52 PM
Seren very cool write...David
Roberts Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Thanks David
Sivey Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 12:23 PM
This is a wonderful write my friend! I loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! You have entered a perfect entry into the contest! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Thanks Russell
Jones Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 11:19 AM
Very nice..I really loved the first verse...
Roberts Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Thank you Donna
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 10:52 AM
I really like how you did this contest, Seren. I should think this one would wow the judge! By the way, I left you two soupmails!
Roberts Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Thanks Andrea
Horsman Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 8:23 AM
these are amazing Seren, so visual...
Roberts Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 11:14 AM
Thank you Harry
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 6:40 AM
Nicely done, Seren! - Love your art in your blog. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Roberts Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 7:47 AM
thank you Anne Lise for the compliment...Seren
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