Ella's Poem To Her Best Friend Peyton

My ten year old daughter Ella wrote her very first poem about her best friend Peyton. She wrote this all by HERSELF :)


P enguins we like together

E ager to show me something new

Y oung when we met

T ogether with him forever

O pen to me all the time

N othing compares to my “P”


Written By: Ella Rose
Date Written: February 18, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lane Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 2:07 AM
Hi Ella! This is a wonderful acrostic. Keep writing and big hugs for you.
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February 19, 2016 at 3:08 PM
I will tell her Lin! Thank you :)-luloo
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February 18, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Please tell Ella she did an amazing job! Adorable :) Peyton will love the poem.
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February 19, 2016 at 3:07 PM
I will Carol, thank you :)She's my precious angel *smiles* -luloo
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