Jan Allison Poet Monorhyme

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Ella and Peyton Forever Friends

Ella is overjoyed when her friend Peyton comes to play
They have a special bond; it has always been that way
You’ll find them having fun together on a sunny day
Playing in the park where on the swings they’ll sway

When Ella has a sleepover then Peyton comes to stay
The last time it was special as it was on her birthday
They have a secret code but mummy knows the things they say
If Ella says a certain special word then Peyton must obey!

Ella says he’s her boyfriend and they will get wed one day
Nick is saving hard for their wedding, as he’ll have bills to pay!

Fictional write based on photo 
Laura Loo’s contest Personal Memories Monorhyme II
05~26~16

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Eve Roper June 18, 2016 at 12:25 PM Jan, this is a great write congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Jan Allison June 18, 2016 at 12:33 PM Thanks Eve I am so glad LuLoo liked it:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues June 16, 2016 at 4:27 PM Nice! I believed it! Jan Allison June 17, 2016 at 1:34 AM Thanks Kim - lets hope it comes true one day:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi June 16, 2016 at 3:01 PM Congratulations, Jan, very well written poem Jan Allison June 17, 2016 at 1:34 AM Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath June 16, 2016 at 10:40 AM Very nice poem, they are lovely and advanced so saving for the day of wedding. Sweet poem my lovely smiling friend. Congrats on your win and a 7. Loved always, bl Jan Allison June 16, 2016 at 2:10 PM I want an invite to the wedding if my prediction does come true lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars June 16, 2016 at 8:00 AM Jan, this was so cute because me and my friend Angel (Peytons mom) always dream of them getting married one day.Congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo Jan Allison June 16, 2016 at 2:10 PM Oh Wow LuLoo what an amazing co-incidence - lets hope dreams come true!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight June 16, 2016 at 7:50 AM Very sweet poem for this contest, Jan. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison June 16, 2016 at 2:09 PM Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

James Tate May 28, 2016 at 5:42 PM What an imagination. Way to go Jan. Jan Allison May 28, 2016 at 6:36 PM Thanks so much James - i do hope Luloo likes my take on the picture:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis May 27, 2016 at 5:50 AM So delightfully charming! It touches the chords of innocence lost! A seven dear, Jan! Jan Allison May 27, 2016 at 5:58 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong May 26, 2016 at 10:07 PM Jan, my youngest daughter had a little friend like this she grew up with who lived across the street from us. They moved to Boston a few years ago. He flew from Boston to Hawaii to be at her wedding. They are still besties! Loved your poem and the warmth it exuded #7 ; ) Jan Allison May 27, 2016 at 5:44 AM Oh how lovely Connie that shows the strength of true friendship:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2016 at 8:45 PM so cute and clever you are, Jan. Does she have their names over there?? I better check that one out again!! Jan Allison May 27, 2016 at 5:37 AM Yes the names are on the photo I do hope LuLoo likes my interpretation of the photo:-) hugs Jan xx

Pam Deremer May 26, 2016 at 3:47 PM A very nice poem. Jan Allison May 26, 2016 at 3:56 PM Thanks Pam I do hope luloo likes my interpretation of it:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith May 26, 2016 at 3:45 PM Cute poem Jan...lots of fun Jan Allison May 26, 2016 at 3:47 PM Thanks Tim I hope LuLoo approves of my take on the image:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath May 26, 2016 at 3:37 PM Very nice poem in contest. Last two lines forced me to smile, very sweet. Loved always my lovely friend, bl Jan Allison May 26, 2016 at 3:47 PM Total fiction BL ... but who knows what the future holds for these lovely friends:-) hugs Jan xx