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Elixir Soul Drum Beat

I was as impervious to light as water. Indeed, as if by death. As ferocious as the sea. However, they have vanished, ironically. I was as straightforward as a mother. Violet is dewy. It burned like a light butterfly. However, they have all vanished. I reclaimed my identity. I surrendered my voice. It gifted my spirit with strength. And my spirit is prepared to soar. My shadow on the walls. However, the words have been cracked. It is now time for the warm drum. I made it to the drum. And I was aware of it in my spirit. What ought to be done. Hours of drumming. Until the universe reacts, there is no need to reply. All of the bodies are suspended in the sky. To everlasting repose.
First place contest winner Recorded by the wonderful voice of Line Gauthier May 29, 2021
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Cunningham Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 2:25 AM
A great accompanying poem to lines, Lasaad You were well inspired. Congratulations on your win. Tom
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May 31, 2021 at 5:34 AM
Thank you so much, Tom, for your kind words and your visit. Have a blessed day
Y. Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 5:28 PM
Hi Lasaad, I'm just coming back to say congratulations to you and Line on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-)
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May 31, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Thank you so much, dear Alexis. Your comments shed a lot of joy on the poem itself. Blessings and warm hugs
Kauffman Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 2:19 PM
A wonderful, lyrical poem Lasaad. Love the conclusions to each section starting with "however." It pulls everything - all your wonderful imagery - together. Congratulations on your win. Many things to reflect on in this poem. Blessings and best wishes.
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May 30, 2021 at 3:37 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, your kind words are so much appreciated, blessings and best regards
Alex Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:24 PM
A beautiful work. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:27 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment Alex
Gauthier Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Well done, Lasaad ~ I enjoyed reading the comments you received below ~
Poet Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Thanks to you, Line, this fantastic work was possible, you inspired me with the poem's theme, and you did a superb recording. This is an excellent example of success when efforts come together to realize a great artwork, benevolent and with just the mutual commitment. Thanks for being so kind
Rose  Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Wonderful things happen when you gift your spirit with strength, Nicely done , Lasaad, thank you for sharing. :)
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May 29, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Thank you so much, Rose. Your lovely words are heartwarming, and I appreciate every word you said, blessings, and best regards
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 1:57 PM
What a fantastic chill out piece Lasaad, an out of body experience, very meditative at one with the universe, as indeed life is meant to be, Lines voice is a great conduit, to express your intended tempo, fine collaboration, cheers to you both, David
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May 29, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Thank you very much for your fantastic review, my buddy David. Sometimes a complete book may become exceptionally well known only because of one or two well-written pages. I'm delighted you appreciate it, and I wish we could have more opportunities to create more. Best wishes and have a wonderful weekend.
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May 29, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Brilliant writing enhanced with the reading of Line's incredible, soft voice. I loved both very much, Lasaad. Super job!
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May 29, 2021 at 11:39 AM
I really appreciate that, Milton. It warms my heart to see that your comments on my page add more expertise and better insight. Thanks for your support. Blessings and regards
Y. Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 7:32 AM
WoW! Lasaad? You penned such a well-written poem. It was so cool to hear it come to life with Line’s lovely voice. Well done, you two. I enjoyed this a lot. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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May 29, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Thank you so much, dear Alexis. Your comments shed a lot of joy on the poem itself. Blessings and warm hugs
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May 29, 2021 at 7:24 AM
Beautiful way of reading a poem at the sound of drums. Well done Line and Lasaad.
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May 29, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Thank you very much, Victor, your comments are always supportive and appreciated.
Daniel Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Lovely poem and a wonderful recording by Line:) well done, Lasaad:)
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May 29, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Thanks for your generous visit and lovely comment Jo, blessings and best regards
Pandit Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 5:50 AM
WOW! This is awesome--I stayed tuned from start to finish, Lassad. My compliments to you and to Line for lending her voice. Enjoyed the beat.
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May 29, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thanks for the kind words Vijay, your comments are always appreciated, blessings and best regards
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