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Elixir of Life

In the fragility of dreams With my eyes wide open At the onset of daylight Crawling tint of lilac hues Sparkle dew drops on lilies Engulf my soul in blues To see the world alive I find myself wondering Of the desires buried Deep inside this fragile heart The forgotten people, The abandoned roads, The lost moments, The unhealed scars, The yellowed pages, All from my journey so far Make me feeble all day long With a darkness beneath daylight In the fragility of dreams With my eyes half closed At the onset of dusk When lavender sky illuminates Exhausted turquoise tides, Sweat-soaked memories Comfort my enervated soul Provide drowsy solace To my played out heart In the weariness of windows Too unyielding to be unfastened Yet willing to let the light inside The cocoon of my hopes Breathes half-heartedly May be not to fly but to survive Wrapped in the panacea of twilight In the fragility of dreams With my eyes meant to be closed I wake up on a glistening blue night A nostalgic halo opens the windows Clenched by my wavering anxieties I find my wings and spread them wide To fly afar through the elixir of night It reminds me of everything That had once been mine That could have been mine And that still is and will always be mine That all my life is but a circle Meant to be found around That nothing is ever lost If in my heart it will be found That my fragility heals my scars Strengthens my spirit Renews my pages To explore my roads Full of errors or glories That the hope on which I never give up And the love dripping over my soul Is my eternal elixir of life That when the day is over Night will always revive My wearied heart and memories Courage in my tenderness I find a waterfall of love and hope When my eyes are meant to be closed At night, in the fragility of dreams.
May 18, 2020 ~Winner: 1st Place in STRAND NO 760,any form any theme Contest by Brian Strand ~Winner: 2nd Place in In the fragility of dreams Contest sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 6/19/2020 9:53:00 AM
Very descriptive poetic wording throughout your piece. If we could only live in our dreams what a beautiful place to be.
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Date: 6/20/2020 12:18:00 PM
We always love to live our dreams if we can. Thank you for your gracious appreciation James :)
Date: 5/28/2020 8:29:00 AM
Aditi, this is a beautiful, vividly descriptive poem. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 5/28/2020 9:09:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words Janice :)
Date: 5/27/2020 10:26:00 PM
Very nicely penned Aditi, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 5/27/2020 11:58:00 PM
Thank you for appreciating Joseph :)
Date: 5/27/2020 3:44:00 PM
Congrats Aditi, much enjoyed. :)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/27/2020 11:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Gary :)
Date: 5/27/2020 2:27:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Aditi :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 2:28:00 PM
Thanks so much for your uplifting words of appreciation Anne. Much love and blessings :)
Date: 5/27/2020 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your Placement.:-) Was travelling in your poem ..coming across so many emotions:love,hope,despair..etc etc Mind-blowing work.Well done mam. Good luck for your other contests too. Take care.With regards ~Deepa:-)
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Date: 5/27/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for taking your time to absorb my words and for your kind words of appreciation Deepa. God bless you :)
Date: 5/27/2020 6:46:00 AM
You take the reader on a vivid journey, so many great descriptions here... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/27/2020 8:33:00 AM
I am thankful to you for appreciating my words and for my placement in the contest. Glad you loved it :)
Date: 5/21/2020 12:48:00 AM
Wow ~ spectacular. A definite FAVE for me, Aditi.
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Date: 5/21/2020 1:39:00 AM
I am so blessed you loved it. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Line :)
Date: 5/19/2020 9:15:00 PM
Bravo! Magnificently done,so polished.
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Date: 5/19/2020 10:25:00 PM
Thanks so much Caren :)
Date: 5/19/2020 7:12:00 AM
Wow! This piece is so delighting, verily delightful to the soul and heart; and I'm so delighted especially with these words:"That the hope on which I never give up And the love dripping over my soul Is my eternal elixir of life..." Thanks, and yes, keep sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 5/19/2020 8:53:00 AM
I am so glad my words could make you delighted. Thank you for appreciating my work and blessing me. Please keep writing and inspiring. God bless you :)
Date: 5/18/2020 9:54:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats, Aditi--you rock!!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/18/2020 10:11:00 AM
Blessed by your abundant grace Vijay :)
Date: 5/18/2020 6:56:00 AM
You found so much exuberance in the prompt line Silent gave! Emotions reverberate throughout ..you invested a lot of energy into this. No doubt a win for you, Aditi.
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Date: 5/18/2020 7:32:00 AM
Always encouraged by your words and appreciation and by the time you invest to read and interpret my words. Thank you so much Vijay :)
Date: 5/18/2020 6:51:00 AM
WoW!...Superb writing my friend...keep it up...someday you'll be a poet LOL...kidding...you are a poet...best wishes from the Wingster :o)
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Date: 5/18/2020 7:31:00 AM
That's really kind of you Wingster. I hope your words come true someday :) Thank you for the encouragement you provide.

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