Elf-Seven Words

To nourish me each day.....Bread
and leads me to heaven.....Gate
within me this leaven;..........Life
By Holy Spirit ,taught.........Shepherd
A guide unto my thought.....Light
Grafted on to His tree.........Vine
this follower of thee...........Way

elf =ENDLINE FORM created by HGD & Dane

See more of each line @ John 6:48/10:9/11:25/10:14/8:12/15:11/14:6
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Pickett Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Good job my friend.....:JP]
Devonshire Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 2:21 AM
Soup mail for you, Brian. And a big thanks, too. Love, Carolyn
Byrne Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 7:18 PM
well crafted............
Haick Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 11:48 AM
Well-written verse in Endline Form, Brian. Also a great message in this poem, as usual. Peace, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Great end line composition in this faith based work. Keep the testimony writes flowing. Sara
Butler Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 9:53 AM
Very cool poem! The form works very well with the message. Very creative! -Mike
Sweetheart Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Another Amazing Bible referenced end line word poetry form... glad u initialized the title too.. good idea Brian to do this .. thankxx for inspiring words and a biblical journey on your elf poems today.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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February 10, 2010 at 8:44 AM
GOOD READ I LOVE YOUR ,elf-SEVEN WORDS.NOW I AM GOING TO READ YOUR OTHER POEM YOU WROTE EARLIER. I AM CURIOS .....I.T.
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