Elf Girl and the Beast

The beast in its lair
In slavering mode
Teeth in waiting
To it's pray it goads

A little elf girl
Naked and scared
Sacrificial 
In it's bone ridden lair

The plight in her eye
As she stares at the beast
To remonstrate her thought
Deter his feast

The fear in her lulls
As the beast turns away
Her little wings flap
Rising from deaths decay



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lucas Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 6:03 PM
a quite magnificant write....i love how you demonstrated the differences and the weakest of both was stronger.....i love the poem.......and I thank you greatly for commenting on basicall all of my poems.......Love Faire
Peranteau Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 4:30 PM
Strongly poetic my friend,..daring and dashing,..I love this ones gest !!!! james
Doggett Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 2:43 PM
Great rhyme highlander, Bill
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 2:41 PM
Different. Sara
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