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Eleventh Hour Cometh

Eleventh hour cometh, and e'er nun too soon Bad tidings beckon, wicked's dark days of doom Tears for fears, death's time's near Cause, evildo'rs oft n'er hearing ear Knave's and thieves, may scoff'n scorn Malevolent scheming's oft so forlorn Military men's might n'er a chance had As king of kings battle, play's winning hand Almighty steeds astride, turning the tide Gainst wicked foe's, banishing blind guides Earth swallow'd whole, fiendish Devil's pride Ne'er to rise again, abyssed together inside Lo! Behold! thousand years have fine'ly past Sinister Spirit's gone f'good, f'rever at last! For PD contest 17 November 2, 2015

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Date: 2/20/2017 6:59:00 AM
Glad you informed me of this great piece. I do like it much.. Excellent flow , message and imagery. Title goes so well with this fine piece my friend. Thanks
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/20/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Robert, yeah, I know it's not for everyone, but thought you might appreciate it, glad to see you did, thanks for stopping by, have a great day!
Date: 2/17/2016 3:00:00 PM
Yes I do like this. It is an entertaining read with a great message.. Really a brilliant write, John. Thanks for steering me this way. I enjoyed the read.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/20/2017 8:56:00 AM
Wow, thanks Danny, this is an old write, but I enjoyed it, not everyone's cup of tea, but glad you liked it. Have a great day!
Date: 12/7/2015 1:17:00 AM
I love the talent shown here. A well-written, thought out poem that entertains and gives a message. Such a good write ... CayCay
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/7/2015 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Cay Cay I kind of missed the mark on this one should have studied up more on Poe style. Thanks for kind words
Date: 12/3/2015 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2015 10:55:00 PM
Thanks Nayda, so kind.
Date: 12/3/2015 4:09:00 AM
Brilliant write John.. congrats on fine win!
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2015 10:54:00 PM
Thanks Dr always appreciate your feedback.
Date: 12/2/2015 11:45:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your Poe, Poe WIN! SKAT :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2015 10:53:00 PM
Thanks Skat you are always commenting so nice.

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