Eleven Octobers

Precious is October as it bestows
An eternal promise that deeply grows,
Relishing  each hour with kindness and grace
Warmed by caresses of a sweet embrace.

Whenever moon pales, night’s laughter is found
Erasing fear when  trials come around—
Your open  arms, in rain, I lean on to
Like a harbor safe till dawn blossoms anew.


And by kindling one dream, all thoughts...we dare
Travel life’s  road with a godly prayer
Draped by love, each fiber,    a weave that lays
Upon October    more joyful these days:

Eleven years,  you still reign in my soul
A wonder rare...    a blessing I extol!


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Still The One Contest of Michelle Faulkner
9/19/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/30/2018 10:27:00 PM
A fantastic title ! Lovely, Nette! Congrats!
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Date: 9/30/2018 9:49:00 PM
A lovely tribute to your mate Nette. Congratulations on your wonderful third placement! : )
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Date: 9/30/2018 4:57:00 PM
a lovely romantic tribute Nette, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/30/2018 3:47:00 PM
'Upon October, more joyful these days,' - that really grabbed me, (I married in September but October was a close second) congratulations and thank you for entering my contest!
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Date: 9/27/2018 8:10:00 PM
Such an endearing blend of October's caress with that of love's. Ideal mix, masterfully done, nette. Best wishes for a big win in the contest. ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/20/2018 12:50:00 PM
Lovely work Nette, I wondered when laughter was found. Best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 9/19/2018 11:16:00 PM
An expression of love that lingers Nette. Just beautiful! : )
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Date: 9/19/2018 11:54:00 AM
This sounds like an ideal relationship, Nette; one that is destined to last much more than 11 years! A delightful poem. Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/19/2018 11:10:00 AM
You have connected with the spirit of oneness and felt the timelessness of love's act through this astounding poem. Thank you for lifting me up!
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Date: 9/19/2018 5:04:00 AM
Almost a sonnet... As always great lines..
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Date: 9/18/2018 10:34:00 PM
A lovely romantic dedication Nette, good luck. Tom
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Date: 9/18/2018 9:29:00 PM
Pure and sweet, Nette. Very nice...good luck in the contest...hugs Charlie
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Date: 9/18/2018 6:20:00 PM
Very sweet tribute to everlasting love..you depicted it in words of happiness and romance. Well done, friend..wishing you two eternal blessings! You wrote a winning poem, nette.
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