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Elevator's Doors

elevator's doors silently close shut mirrored stainless steel immaculate woman dabs tears in reflection
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 11:46 PM
this is so interesting. Makes me want to know more about "dad's tears"
Onclaud Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 4:34 AM
amazing pivot you got here, sara... very finely done.. thanks for being part of your recent contest.. huggs
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 7:04 PM
very very clever tanka good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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