Elevator Ride

Walking down a long corridor
In the hosiptal on the first floor
Just going to visit a friend
Hoping for him its not the end

A person in gray in same hallway
Coming from the opposite
Side, enter the elevator
With us he abides

Going up he ask us
I am planning on that
When my eyes clear
I see that EMS shirt he wears

Just making small  converstion
He ask if we are all right
I say yes, why are you
Looking for customers tonight

(Sorta of Rhyme)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 4:25 AM
Thank you for sharing with us Sara. Love, Carol
Stone Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 1:33 PM
Cute poem, enjoyed the read....Sam
Culverhouse Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 12:48 PM
funny, good one!
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September 8, 2009 at 5:17 AM
you make me laugh with a mouthful of coffee........o
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