Elevation

Elevation


Elliptical thoughts race
Elusive in nature
Entanglement undone
Emancipated soul
Elevating one's mind
Evolving being made
Eventual true peace


Poetry Contest: Pleiades E
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Rules: 
- 1 original poem in the Pleiades form.
- Must start with an E.
- 1 word title starting with Letter E.  
- 7 lines all starting with Letter E describing or depicting the title. 
- 6 syllables per line. 

September 18, 2016
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Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 8:16 PM
very nice, Congrats for the win, Richard
Martins Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 3:39 AM
Thanks for the kind words Andrea :)
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September 25, 2016 at 3:22 AM
Congrats RIchards..good work!
Neumann Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 12:45 AM
Congrats. True peace.
Martins Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 7:56 PM
True peace indeed Kai :)... Thank you.... Richard
Leiser Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Congrats on your win, Richard :)
Martins Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 7:55 PM
Thanks Laura :).... Richard
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 12:32 PM
- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Martins Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 7:55 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, messages like yours make this newbie peotrysouper feel most welcomed :)... Richard
Martins Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Thank you very much Laura for the kind words :)..... Richard
Scars Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Richard-true peace we all hope for...Congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Merryman Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Richard, you chose a unique topic for your poem and then uniquely described it. Congrats on your win! Blessings!
Martins Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 5:50 AM
Thanks Kim, all this newbie does is try each day to be a better poet :)... Richard
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 3:55 PM
'excellent entry' for the contest- good luck in :-) hugs Jan xx
Martins Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Jan :) Your support for this newbie is appreciated.. Richard
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