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Elevation

Elevation Elliptical thoughts race Elusive in nature Entanglement undone Emancipated soul Elevating one's mind Evolving being made Eventual true peace Poetry Contest: Pleiades E Sponsor: Kim Merryman Rules: - 1 original poem in the Pleiades form. - Must start with an E. - 1 word title starting with Letter E. - 7 lines all starting with Letter E describing or depicting the title. - 6 syllables per line. September 18, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2016 8:16:00 PM

very nice, Congrats for the win, Richard

Richard Martins
Date: 9/26/2016 3:39:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words Andrea :)

Date: 9/25/2016 3:22:00 AM

Congrats RIchards..good work!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/23/2016 12:45:00 AM

Congrats. True peace.

Richard Martins
Date: 9/23/2016 7:56:00 PM

True peace indeed Kai :)... Thank you.... Richard

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/22/2016 1:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Richard :)

Richard Martins
Date: 9/23/2016 7:55:00 PM

Thanks Laura :).... Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2016 12:32:00 PM

- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Martins
Date: 9/23/2016 7:55:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, messages like yours make this newbie peotrysouper feel most welcomed :)... Richard

Richard Martins

Date: 9/22/2016 10:01:00 AM

Thank you very much Laura for the kind words :)..... Richard

Lu Loo

Date: 9/22/2016 9:41:00 AM

Richard-true peace we all hope for...Congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/21/2016 8:55:00 PM

Richard, you chose a unique topic for your poem and then uniquely described it. Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Richard Martins
Date: 9/22/2016 5:50:00 AM

Thanks Kim, all this newbie does is try each day to be a better poet :)... Richard

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2016 3:55:00 PM

'excellent entry' for the contest- good luck in :-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Martins
Date: 9/18/2016 5:32:00 PM

Thanks Jan :) Your support for this newbie is appreciated.. Richard