Elephants, Wolves and Chimps, Oh My

Elephants, Wolves and Chimps, Oh My!

In Africa, young elephants are sweet.
The matriarchs remain the leaders of
their group, and youngsters help these elders eat
when they’re too weak to chew. Now that’s real love!

In packs of wolves, the boss is Mom or Dad.
It seems as if it’s in their DNA.
The parents snap or growl to show they're mad.
The pups back off. They do not disobey!

Young primates also do as they are told.
They’re very sociable, and studies show
the young pay more attention to the old
to learn the things that monkeys need to know!

Too bad when human parents growl or snap,
some kids talk back or do not give a crap!

Nov. 29, 2017 for Michael Vacek's  
Sonnet with a Twist, Nature's Lesson to Humanity Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/10/2018 7:25:00 PM
Many good lessons here to be earned, Andrea. A most interesting read.
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Date: 12/10/2017 6:31:00 PM
Wow, so very true, why can't we be more like animals at least with the obeying part.
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Date: 12/9/2017 4:09:00 PM
Yes, the rules and regulations among the 'wild' species remained intact through the ages. Much to learn from them! Great Sonnet, Andrea, and congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/7/2017 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, I love your last stanza :) Hugs eve ~`*
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Date: 12/7/2017 1:57:00 PM
Swinging back 'round with congrats!! All the best, John.
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Date: 12/7/2017 1:32:00 PM
Andrea, You are at the top of the contest list for a reason. Most animals take heed to life's lessons from their elders. I agree with Charlie Smith on the last two lines; they could be interchanged. Too bad I didn't have his insight when judging. Sadly, some kids these days get the growl and snap so much that they pay no heed.
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Date: 12/3/2017 12:10:00 AM
Knock 'um to the moon! Adult and child self-serving sassers! It was like listening to perfectly executed English in a Nat Geo doc that suddenly and unexpectedly turned to snap - crap. I just loved it, that part was a perfect ending in my world. I got nothing for this contest, I must ask my muse. Loved my time here ... CayCay
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Date: 12/2/2017 9:43:00 AM
Nicely done, Andrea!! Lessons to be learnt, indeed!! Good luck in the contest! Regards, John!
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Date: 12/1/2017 5:32:00 AM
Nature at it's best. A natural occurrence for young adults to test boundaries to prepare them (and their parents) for their inevitable leaving of the "nest."
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Date: 11/30/2017 12:58:00 PM
Wonderful Sonnet. Enjoyed it immensely. Very informative.
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Date: 11/30/2017 11:18:00 AM
I love what you did with the prompt, Andrea - I find this a very difficult one and decided to skip. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/30/2017 10:19:00 AM
Your ending couplet is very true and the last line gave me a chuckle, Andrea, I'm sure your kids were never like this...nor mine. ;) Best of luck. John
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Date: 11/30/2017 10:15:00 AM
Interesting look at our fellow creatures on this blue earth! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/30/2017 8:45:00 AM
You could just a easily reverse the last two lines, sadly. Well done Andrea...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/1/2017 9:05:00 PM
yeah, and that is why a lot of the times why the kids are so messed up!!
Date: 11/30/2017 8:37:00 AM
Great twist at the end! So true for many today...
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Date: 11/30/2017 7:00:00 AM
A lesson well taught and learned--this form is your specialty--best for a win, Andrea!
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Date: 11/29/2017 10:00:00 PM
A lesson to be learned Andrea...best wishes in the contest
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Date: 11/29/2017 9:11:00 PM
I loved this! So creative, and I really believe this!! So to speak! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wB9YIsKIEbA
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