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Elephant's Exclusive Environment

Exotic elephants excitedly Enclose Eastern entertainers Entering exclusive environment; Expeditiously excluding entry Every evening except Easter, Exceptionally expedient exposure Ensures elephant’s environs. March 23, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/24/2021 12:04:00 AM

Nicely done, never easy, but you have made it SEEM effortless.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/24/2021 9:06:00 AM

Uh, it requires a bit of work and a dictionary! This one seemed to make more sense, really, than either of the other two, although I submitted the "S" one to the contest. Thanks for the read.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/23/2021 8:15:00 PM

Very well done Milton. This took thought. exceptional. God Bless, JB P.S. I love elephants.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/23/2021 8:34:00 PM

Thanks, Judy. I had a lot of fun with these alliterations. You should give it a try, if you enjoy playing around with words.

Virginia Gelok

Date: 3/23/2021 7:36:00 PM

this type of poetry is new to me...I must try it. You have inspired me to try something new. I really enjoyed the read.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/23/2021 7:49:00 PM

Thank you, Virginia. It was new to me, too, but I ended up writing three of them, I think. I love playing with words, so it was therapeutic. Give it a try; I think you'll enjoy it, and enter the contest. GL

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2021 1:16:00 PM

Very cool alliteration, Milton. Hope you had as much fun writing this as I had reading it! Hugs, Carolyn

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/23/2021 1:39:00 PM

LOL. Thanks, Carolyn. Hugs back. You've really helped me this week!